please update soon

please update this story soon

Oh Jeez, I have a feeling you won't continue this, but it doesn't hurt to try - please update as soon as life lets you, because even if there are run-on sentences and mistakes of the like, the plot is good and the story is good, and I simply can't wait to read more! :)

I don't understand.. Why would Regulus affect Sirius being the secret keeper?

please update this story soon

Very interesting story. I just love Siri and Reg! Good work.

Update! Update! Update!

Oh wow! It's not quite canon, coz Dumbledore didn't know about the horcruxes...but I guess that could just have been that he didn't know there was more than one...hm. Anyway, either way :), it's very good. I love this story.

I really like the way Sirius is portrayed as so relaxed, and cocky, but turns serious when it's important. And the way he went to try to help his brother, and tried to protect him from Dumbledore's idea. Some of these sorts of stories, Sirius refuses to forgive. Anyway! Glad you're still writing this story!

Rach

Ooh!

I'm so in love with this story! And I like the way the chess games are still a part of it all, but their relation has moved so far away (and beyond it).

I think, the only criticism I can think of is that it's fairly stereotypical to have the girl (Marie?) ugly...

But it's hardly crit!

Hope you keep updating!

Rach

That made me cry. Sirius and Regulus are 2 of my favorite characters and I love to read fics about their relationship. Update soon :)

Hey!

I'm so glad you updated!

This is great...really sad.

I'm trying to think of some sort of criticism (the little thing at the bottom about the "well rounded critique"!) but I can't really think of anything.

Maybe Regulus' character is a bit strange, he yells at Sirius for being like his parents, but then says he partly agrees with his parents. Then again, maybe that shows how torn and confused he is...

Anyway! I love it! How long is it going to be?

Rach

Cool idea and I liked how you wrote the relationship between the Black brothers. Please write more thanks.

Hey! This is really interesting, I've always wondered about the relationship between Regulus and Sirius, but the ones I've read have always been very out of character. (I always thought defense of Reg could be an excuse for Sirius' treatment of Snape.

You haven't updated this in what seems like awhile, but I really hope you keep going!

Rach

aw

Great start! Can't wait for the next part!