beautifully written, and BEAUTIFULLY rounded off

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WOW!Just wow!I absolutely loved everything about this,the idea of Percy being a dad,the way you've described every emotion,every reaction of both Remus and Percy's were so well done I just can't stop reading this!Seriously!And the way you've compared Remus to Dumbledore for certain things,really cool!

Especially the way you started with the idea that Percy had been overlooked among so many children and the way he feels neglected by all of them in different ways!

Lol yeah Dumbledore was a difficult man to refuse when he requests something,i lied how you got that too!

XD!I laughed at the quill-sharpener line though,was it really there in HP?Haha,awesome fic,great style and words!

This is amazing! I love it! It's so sad though. It gives me a new look at Percy and makes me think that maybe in the Harry Potter series that maybe Percy isn't so bad... Keep up the amazing work :D

That was extremely well written. That Percy was a spy has always been an unknown. He could have been and Dumbledore would have been the only one who knew. Fairly certain neither Remus nor Snape would have been let in on the secret. Too much chance of Percy being compromised. He may not have been and it was pride that kept him from the family after it was proved that Voldy was actually back. Liked it very much and didn't think it rambled, but trailed off in a manner that suited Percy's personality.

I loved this. It was so good and showed a side of Percy that many people never think of, Thanks.

I just really like this.

Whoa, I found this on a rec on livejournal and it's really epic! I've always disliked Percy but the way you portrayed him in the fic made me feel bad... He does have to deal with a lot of angst as the middle child and his type of character would be the main character in many other books. I'm glad that you included Lupin too! He understands the amount of trouble that comes in war, especially betrayal. This fic definitely needs some more loving! Twilight gets too much attention sometimes with a faulty plot... but sparkly vampires seduct me a lot... Keep up the good work!

I read this story so long ago but didn't have an account yet to favorite. It's bringing tears to my eyes at the joy of finding it again. Thank you so much for such an amazing piece.

Very well written. Had me hooked onto every word.

I liked how the conclusion wasn't some sappy family reunion. Instead, the lines spoke to me with an echo of persistence, inner strength and heaviness. Thanks for the great read.

Oh, Crap my eyes are all teary.

See what you've done to me! You are such a fantabulas writer that I'm crying. This awas so sweet and I wish J.K wrote it in her book.

Luv, Katy

Beautiful. There is no other way to describe it. All I can say is that that was amazingly, astoundingly, beautiful.

i had shiverz runing down my spine as i read this. it is so good

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Nice idea and I can imagine Percy was probably like this. Thanks for writing.

Oh my gosh! I absolutely loved this!

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