|Reviews for Return to Lyme|
| The Photosynthetic Elf 5/11/13 . chapter 28
I have just discovered this today. Please tell me there will be more story?
| speedygonzales05 4/14/13 . chapter 28
| Briony 4/11/13 . chapter 6
Why don't know know that where means a place, e.g (where are we going) it does not mean the past tense of be which is WERE. Also when you are writing that we are going somewhere that's WE'RE.
Where, Were and We're are three different words that cannot be used interchangeably, they have very dissimilar meanings it would be good if you learnt them.
| lovingthis 4/4/13 . chapter 27
I first discovered this story a few months ago and read it all in one sitting. (I am ashamed to admit that I had not reviewed, I have become lacking as of late.)
However, having re-watched Persuasion earlier today, I sought this story out in the hopes that it would have continued in my absence.
I started to read a couple of chapters back to refresh my memory and to enjoy the build up and there have been no chapters added!
Having just turned to the other reviews to look for some support in my case I find that I have already reviewed?! Considering that I did not think I had, surely this works in my favour? A girl who keeps ghost reading is reviewing your story times over! That is something indeed!
PLEASE update soon! PLEASE! I will otherwise be forced to nag you incessantly until I get my required chapters!
| Barbara 3/10/13 . chapter 24
You are a wicked person! ;-)
| Barbara 3/10/13 . chapter 21
Please, finish this story soon! I can't wait for a happy ending any longer!
| stef 3/6/13 . chapter 28
please more! where are you?
| SophieRay3 2/14/13 . chapter 28
OMG! Persuasion is my favorite JA book too. I love your story almost as much as the original. PLEASE UPDATE SOON!
| Yeghishe 2/14/13 . chapter 2
Poor Anne being subjected to Fredrick's confusion.
I would offer that I don't think the term "kids" is period and its a little jarring to read.
On to chapter 3.
| Yeghishe 2/14/13 . chapter 1
I really enjoy alternate path stories for Jane Austen. I look forward to rereading this excellent fic. I finally got myself an account and look forward to reviewing all my old favorites!
| bandgeek1688 2/9/13 . chapter 28
Hello! I have been enjoying this story so far and I hope you update soon! I find it incredibly annoying that a lot of the Persuasion stories on Fanfiction are modern, so I'm glad you chose to write this with the Regency setting.
Hope that Frederick gets better soon and he and Anne finally admit their feelings!
| Guest 2/6/13 . chapter 28
Poor Fredrick, I hope Lady Russel realised what Mr Elliot may have done and no longer supports a match between him and Anne. HOpe Anne stays to nurse him
| lovingthis 1/25/13 . chapter 28
So I've read this entire thing in one go- look at your stats you'll see me ;) - And while loving the story I have found it quite amusing to see your AN's at the beginning of the most recent chapters, "I'm sorry! Forgive me?"
These sadly remind me of myself and updating my stories. I tell you this to let you know I understand how difficult it is to update even when you really want to. BUT, It's been like... 3 and a bit years since you started this!
PLEASEEEEEEEEEE update quick! I have loved what you are doing.
I noticed a previous AN about your grammar and sadly a few homophomes have made reading a bit difficult and I think that your non continuous writing has caused you to restate things from previous chapters which need not be said. But these are only little things and not really nit-picky worthy.
But I guess that goes to show just how good this really is!
So in short: I love this and update more!
| Guest 1/22/13 . chapter 1
Please update I have been waiting for months
| niftynoshing 1/15/13 . chapter 28
Wonderful! Simply wonderful story! I anticipate a new chapter.