love love love...! :D XD } 3

love love love...! :D XD } 3

This one really surprised me! Oh my god! I wasn't expecting much out of it, but after a while i got so into the story! Thank you so much for giving me such a nice afternoon x3 *heart*

There's just one tiny thing...that ending...i wanted to rip Hisoka apart! And he's my fav character, but seriously, this calls for a sequal, which i see you haven't wrote, and i also saw the last story you posted was in 2009. So...that sucks! I guess we'll never have that sequal, anyway, i really liked the story, and i loved Kelvin all worried about Illumi x3 I just wished Hisoka was less of an arsehole at the end xD

Think about that sequal, ne? ;)

I love your story! (well, to be honest, sometimes I got a bit lost... I liked the alternations of POV and the fuzzy *I'm not sure if it the right word...* atmosphere of the night club but I'm french and, in some parts, your style is at the edge of what my language ability can comprenhend on a first reading! XD)

But I love the pairing and the way you depict Illumi! He wes so lost and contradictory, it makes me want to hug him! T_T And even Hisoka is touching in his way. But are you really going to leave us with this... "end"? (right now, I feel angry enough to take Hisoka down myself!) I couldn't find the sequel that you PROMISED in the list of your fanfic... don't tell me you didn't write it? T_T

Anyway, thank you for sharing your work with us! I loved it!

Illumi and Hisoka our a tad bit outta character :/

this my first hisoka and illumi fanfic and i love them so much thank you for the amazing story! :D

Why is this marked complete? Anyway. *shakes head* Overall, I found it confussing and ingenious, as weird as that sounds. I'm not sure I liked Kevin's personality, especially after his scene with Kuroro since I'm weak against the Ryodan dancho. That's not to say that he doesn't give amazing advice and makes for an interesting character.

I love the pairing, by the way. It might appear a bit unconvetional but I'm sure the two would be great for each other. They are both so alike and yet so different... It's scary and magical at the same time!

Thanks for taking time to write this for us and please keep up the good work! I'm really enjoying it so far.

I didn't really get everything in this story, it was a bit messy at times, especially in the beginning. But it was still very enjoyable, so well done!

wowzers, this was amazing! What's the name of the sequel? Must READ!

wow..i just had to review to this again..it just agve me so much inspiration for changes..i wanna write a Kelvin talk withIllumi scene..and what better than to read this again...they have one thing in common..family issues. Kelvin comes frm the mafia and all they care about is blood, honour..but most of all family..so is the same with Illumi, family. so this should be a start of a nice...verry nice..actually..friednship with Illumi and kelvin..

when hisoka starts to get too busy for his work witht eh spiders..and his interest in their danchou...then illumiw il feel lonely..and who else to go to..other than our beloved Kelvin..shit..i jsut thought of that..haha..:p

I am going to have to mend Kelvin into something that is mine..see i cant make him exactly how u did him..id love to..but i know i cant..so no dissapointment please!:p but yah i did realize one thing..he really is the string i needed..he tied all my changes characters otgether..i loved that..thank you! hes vital to changes!

lol Illumi listening to his brother..haha..fake gothic mixed up clothes..haha..POSERXD ya its funny Illumi being this vulnerable in the club..while he looked so powerful and horrible at that fight with Killua...see the difference..hes oout of his comfort zone.

this is good..I am starting to think..im loosing alot of interest in Hisoka nd Illumi..cmon..lets just admit it hah but id love to continue changes..with them..like..the chemistry is stil there..i will not let out much because i truely myself dnt knw whats gunna happen..i really dont O.o haha..but..yah..i am goig to MAke themINTENTIONALLY boring for the mean time..i want readers to lose interest like i did..I just started on the new changes chapter..:p yes im that slow hahaha...

Nywho..

oha nd i love how hisoka was bored at first as he saw the club with the 'sex' people in it..whiuch really werent THAT sex to him at all..lol nothinf seemed to interest him..but illumi ;)

"His body was muscled, but not distinctly ripped like Hisoka."...do u have any idea...what thatslike? all the time my friends would ask..what kind of muscles do u like soad? Id say..u know..the guys who have muscles..but like..its NOT That Ripped liek those guys from the gym? I just love the HINT of muscle on someone..haha nd to Illumi..wow..WOWNESS:p im just head over heels for him again haha..GAWD( i ended up making out with Moody, guy who looks like Illumi, :p just to satisfy my lust..wow..hottest makeout ever il tell u that for sure. No love. Just LUST.)

haha and when Hisoka realzed he had a crush on Illumi, in that one frame freeze lol..he cracked upXD halarious! something i would do what was that about indeed? Hisoka never...*crushesXD* XD:p so he must be shocked himself wahahahah...

lol cant wait to friggin read that last sex scene..oh god..haha im just..tingling now thknking about it :p

OMG this was so awesome!

I love your descriptions, and all Illu's thoughtsdialogues XD

I think it's really... umm... I can't think of the proper adjective to describe this, but I just LOVE how Illu just wants someone to love him XD SO CUTE! And all the characters reactions just seem so believable and OMG your amazing!

Well except maybe:

"He was surprised he could still think, let alone say anything rational, when all he wanted to do was clench his eyes tight and weep like a violated little girl."

Hisoka? Hisoka? of all ppl... kinda surprising... never thought of him as someone so... innocent.

I don't think I could ever write a fic as amazing as yours but I do have this crappy one I started a while ago... maybe I'll post it on FF...

Awesome chappy

Illufluffy blue cotton candy?

It's not really no love, I think it kinda hints at...

Can't believe Hiso's ass is virgin... but then again I also can't believe he's going to be uke XD

Must read next chapter...

Illu's practically a virgin? yet he agreed to this stupid bet? Wow... I wanna read what happens, so see ya again in the next chappy.

Quote: “Illumi, your hair is black like your mom. Whack!”

LOL, that IS a pretty stupid reason :)

Wow, that sounds like an awesome party. I like your descriptions... and isn't Hisoka (almost) always in 'stalker-mode'? The hysterical laughter was definitely not expected... And will it really be just a one-night stand? No long term relationship? :)

Nice chappy XD Hm, did Illu just FEEL something? And I'm totally confused about what Kelvin is trying to do.