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Reviews for: Suzume, Darling
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2009-01-10 . chapter 1
A good story indeed. I was kinda amazed at how even someone like Seto Kaiba can be gentle... Impressive! I think the idea of a baby was great. Good work! Keep on!
Irvine Cypher
2008-12-05 . chapter 1
Uncle Toto! priceless!!
Flying on a Broken Wing
2008-09-28 . chapter 1
poor Yugi! Im an avid puzzleshipper and puppyshipper but I think it'll be cool to see YugxSetoxjou, btw I have NO idea what that couple is called, weird. I think that the next pairing can either be fabulous or horrible depending on the author, so the pressure is on, but I have faith. Jeez, what a terribly long run-on sentence!
starwefter
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
Sheesh -- can't have Yami drowning me in a swimming pool, even by accident. I guess I'd better review...

I liked the contrasts in this -- Seto being so pissy about the party, and then so goofy over the baby when no one is looking, and then pissy again. And is there some foreshadowing of him getting to know the rest of them, in spite of his best efforts not to?

And Yami at the end -- "See you soon, Uncle Toto" -- was that a threat or a promise?

Whatever is coming next?
dragonlady222
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
This was kind of cute. Seto Kaiba being hman and even nice to Yuugi. I feel bad for Yami being so jealous and Mokuba too.
Kukki Boo
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
Uncle Toto. How interesting xD I like the ending, but it does seem to need more continuation. So that's good there will be some. Good luck with your writer's block.
Cefferis
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
Ugh, it's called /Battleshipping/ *rolls eyes*
Why is it that at the end of all your fics Seto is really annoyed or really sad? He deserves a happy ending, at least once and awhile! D:
I think the reason you thought this was dull before you posted it was because the scenes changed a lot, and it seemed to drag it out. But now that it's finished I think it's really good.
Poor Seto getting scolded for being an underage parent XP Hasn't the poor guy been a parent since he was 10 anyways?
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