 Cassandra30 2009-10-26 . chapter 1Really good! |
 sparky40sw 2008-09-05 . chapter 1well written, and very sad, because too often true and accurate.
Too bad that each individual does not ask WHY before entering a fray.
For life and liberty, never giving the 1st offense, never for 'revenge' or to steal the life, liberty or property of another. Those are the rules of a just war.
thanks for sharing |
 Fmh 2008-08-26 . chapter 1Interesting start not sure where it is going or is it a one shot? |
 anaknisatanas 2008-08-12 . chapter 1I liked how you started this and am very much looking forward to what will come next. |
 excessivelyperky 2008-08-11 . chapter 1Ah. But one man's terrorist _is_ another man's freedom fighter--if you win. Ask Menachem Begin and Jomo Kenyatta about that...oh, yes, and Benjamin 'if we do not hang together we shall certainly hang separately' Franklin.
If you demonize a certain segment of people long enough, they will, unsurprisingly enough, live down to others' beliefs. Tom Riddle should have given the Marauders a prize--they were his best recruiters. |
 Winoniel 2008-08-11 . chapter 1Great start! I like the rhetorical devices that frame the philosophical question. Looking forward to more! |
 Someone aka Me 2008-08-10 . chapter 1Wow. This is amazing!
@(*_*)@ |
 blue artemis 2008-08-09 . chapter 1How sad. |
 SomeGuyFawkes 2008-08-09 . chapter 1This is not a story but an "expository lump". Worse, it has a patently false and leftist philosophy of conflict that is presented as unchallenged truth.
While it *might* be true that many do not know why they fight; many *do* know, and certainly *true* freedom fighters do.
That leftist lie about "One man’s terrorist is another man’s freedom fighter" is cliché as well as patently false. As a throwaway statement, it serves only to alienate readers, even if they are fooled by it. |
 biancaruth 2008-08-09 . chapter 1It is strangely beautiful and yet barbaric how well you seem to understand war. |
 Voldemort is Dead 2008-08-09 . chapter 1I am looking to where is story is going to go. |
 Wonderbee31 2008-08-09 . chapter 1Curious and an interesting shortfic here, and a pov we don't usually see at times. |