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| swordbunny4486 2006-11-30 ch 2, | abusefunny |
| Paty Cockrum 2004-05-16 ch 1, anon. | abuseWhat I have read of this is whimsical and fun. I would love to read further. I am an inveterate Magneto fan...Especially the Claremont Magneto...and enjoy stories of whimsy with him. They so rarely appear. this one has the makings of either fun, or insights into his payche...or perhaps both. so, where do I find the rest of it? LOL Paty |
| Nevyn 2003-05-04 ch 2, | abusegetting interesting here. i'll have to go and find out now what BBG and AZA are... *cough's embarresinly* Anyway, I hope that you finish this. It is getting queit good. *smiles* |
| Nevyn 2003-05-04 ch 1, | abusethis si good so far and I was just trying to imagin magnito going to a teenage party. *grins* he'd stick out! hehe. *of to read the next part* |
| Floria Tosca 2003-02-21 ch 1, | abuseThis is cute. I like seeing the non-action sides of superheroes' lives, and I like ethnic humor if it's done well and not derogatory, and so far this story is charming. M, bagels. |
| Brenda Shaffer-Shiring 2003-01-11 ch 2, | abuseVery cute. I especially liked the way the letter just showed up on the kitchen table -- no mailbox or anything. Interesting to see Magneto/Eric as part of a faith community; I've been reading the character for years and this aspect of him is seldom touched on. Also interesting the way everybody seems to take their powers for granted. Is there more to this story? |
| Rowan Seven 2002-04-03 ch 1, anon. | abuseCute. The first part in the beginning with the letter was amusing, and the story has so far continued it's light tone. Not bad. Also, the song was enjoyable to read. |
| Sienn'rha (not signed in) 2001-11-09 ch 1, anon. | abuse=] Interesting, and very sweet. More? |