Wow...just wow..this was such a fantastic story..I loved it in all ways. Usually such storied involving teachers & their love lifes send bad pictures into my head, but yours was just wonderful. I really liked the "You know, it’s usually the students we must pry apart in the corridors." part..it made my day..Keep writing! And one more WOW...

*adds to fave authors, stories& high recommends*

much squee.

Delightful.

Grate story pleas revew mine

This is an amazing story and I think it quite well written. please continue with it. I'd like to see it develop.

Aww, she didn't mind, she must really love him, I'm glad :)

Happy, happy! :)

I do hope there is more to come! There'd better be, because this is a good story! :)

Love Rhubarb

oh, I see, hehehe. That was a pleasant suprise, way to go Sevvie is what I would be saying about now! :P

Trust Dumbledore to come bumbling along, see seems to turn up at the worst times & not seem to relise it, just smile. Nicely handled, I'd say. Another great chapter *worried because she is approaching chapter 6 & that is the most recent chapter posted*

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Awww, Sev, Yay, Celeste did hug him :) I'm glad, I knew I could trust her:) Bet that made him feel better :)

Good work with this chapter too! You are doing very well with getting the other side of Sevvie out but not recking what we already know of him.

Love Rhubarb

Oh my goodness, poor Snape! I just want to reach in & hug him! Oh well, I guess I'll just have to trust Celeste to do that for me.

Your explanaition of his past all fits so well, I know J.K.R. is highly unlikely to use this explanation in her books, seeing as they are for children aswell, but really, it is the best explanation I have come accross! Good Work!

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ok, I give up! Who is she? I was a bit confused as to why she greeted him so casually & with the words "Big Bad" at first, & why he so badly needed to avoid her, but, ha, stupid me! They knew each other *all falls into place in my pretty backwards mind*. Oh, well, you certainly have shown his inner struggle very well, even in just two chapters! Way to go!

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Wow, this is good! I could really feel his anger! You are really good at writing Snape! This is very good work! I have to read the rest now!

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aww! kinda nasty with the remus stuff (never took him for gay...), but it was cute!

*wipes sad/happy tears from her eyes* Bee-yootiful.

more, more, more please, more! I loved it!

Oooh! I just read the whole thing, and I love it! Heehee Remus Lupin. That's great.