Whew!
I really thought they were broke up officially..
Awesome ending!
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i always love the softer side of shego... at least kim wasn't held back by her pride... but you could at least given us a much clearer details of the story or perhaps your reader here is just simply implying to author to create a longer version of this story wherein we could get to see the before and after events of the breaking up story... if that's possible thank you very much but if you don't feel like doing it, still, thanks for posting your story and maybe i could ask for your permission to let me do the before and after events when i got the time... but working together on details and plots would be a lot of fun, yes?

of course! lol and then of course have them get back together. i am amused lol. i liked it

The swearing, especially "'k off and die" seems a bit OOC, or at least out of tone, but that's the only issue I have. The rest all good work. An odd reaction to a necklace, but a good story out of that.

Clayton,

I have the unenviable duty of giving you a Well-Deserved Flame.

There is so much wrong with this tale; but I will go through it piece by piece...

First the language is way, Way, WAY, *WAY* out of the realm for a 'K' Rating! It is enough so that if it is not changed in the next five days, I will do something I never thought I would do to ANYBODY here...report you to FanFiction Support for "...Violation of 'Terms of Service' and 'Story Guidelines'...".

Next, you should have had more moments away from the diary to support its entries. If you had a scene for each entry like the one for 'August 11th', that could have added so much more to the story.

Finally, a minor point...You have the last entry as August 16th 2009. Did Shego have that many calls from Drakken and harbor such ill feelings toward Kim for a little more than a year? If not, you might wnt to make that adjustment...along with the 'T' rating.

My notice about reporting you is not an idle threat, but an IRON-CLAD GUARANTEE!! To allow you time to access this review and your story settings, I am giving you until 11:59pm on August 15th to make the change. The complaint will be 'pre-typed' and ready for a 'cut-and-paste' to sent to FanFiction Support as of 12:01am on August 16th (taking two minutes to access and send the e-mail on my end).

Thankfully not your friend in wriitng,

The samurai Crunchbird

THAT WAS CUTE... MAN YOU SHOULD WRITE MORE KIGO... YOUR STORY WAS SHORT BUT SATISFYING... I LOVE IT...STUPID SHEGO...SHE'S HELLA FUNNY... MAN ILOVESHEGO...GREAT JOB WRITE MORE AND LONGER VERSIONS OF KIGO'S...

Well it would be a terrible ending if they didn't get back together so the break up would end up hurting them both and THAT'S not good.

Invader Johnny Signing Off.

y'know the other thing you haven't done is to break them up, and stop them from getting back together...I'm just saying. They got back together, yay ^^

good story. i always like a happy ending