I love hopw they argue! Its going to be so much fun watching them fall in love!

i luv it. and i luv what u did with the characters. please update soon.

What lie?

:) cool

Really interesting.

Hmm, evil Bella and reluctantly evil Edward - interesting pair. I like the sparks flying between the 2 already. This is a definitely interesting twist, I personally haven't seen this type of storyline before. Unique is good in the realm of fanfiction! Thanks for writing!

very interesting story i think it is really really good...the grammer is fine i do have questions of like why does she hate being called bella intead of the other way around of her hating being called isabella also y does she dislike the imortal childern?? will her and edward end up liking each other more into the story?? well umm... i can't wait to keep reading that is some cliffie ther eand keep up the awesome writing hope to read more soon.

Okay, either I'm missing something but...a lie? What lie? I'm majorly confused about that...Nice story though, I like where it is going.

HigherMagic x

I love this story already, and I can't wait until the next update!

I can't help but think that Veronica had it easy. I'm thinking I would LOVE to die in Edwards arms. sigh. Thanks for keeping him in character even though he is consuming humans.

Bella seems like a spoiled brat and Edward the perfect child. I sure hope you show him being a little more antagonistic towards her in future chapters. It'll be fun to see his exaspiration with her and for him to do something OOC.

Thanks for sharing!

i like it, its interesting

Hm.

It's good, but Bella being a brat is kinda...annoying.
:P

I don't blame Edward for treating her like a child.

It's good though!
Update soon!

This is an interesting story. The third person perspective is very unique, please continue!

Love, love, love Bratty Bella. She's like an annoying child in the grocery store crying because mom won't buy them a candy bar. It's kind of fun to see her misbehave. Hopefully Edward will straighten her out.

So I take it that Bella is flaunting Demetri around to get a rise out of Edward. Nice twist.

Edward seems to still be our compassionate, kind, sexy vampire that we all love. Can't wait to read more about them. Are they feeding off of humans? If so, it would be interesting to hear Edwards experience and how he copes with hearing their thought before they die.

Thanks for sharing!

I like it so far! Edward's so cute when he's being annoying. ^_^

And I'm just curious, will the other Cullens appear anywhere in this?