good story... updating anytime soon?

Carry on please? I want to read more (: Its really good.

i love it! make more! now!

PLEASE OH, PLEASE, OH PLEASE write more! i love it!

not bad.
update i want to see what happens next

This is cute!

Please continue, I really like how you've written it!
Great writing!
~~Kitty

This is absoulutly BRILLIANT. You really should continue. I'll be waiting for the next UPDATE ;)
Keep Writing!!

awh, i think its cute. You should continue. i wanna see where its going. :))