(Damn it Seylin! There had better be a sequel somewhere where they fix this!) I'd write one if I were you, she can get mighty scary when she's mad. ( Yer damn right I can.) Language. (English.) You know what I meant. (whatever! Yeah so good work Seylin, I do hope they can work this out but if not oh well I'll live.) Mature of you. (How many points?) Five. (only five?) You asked how many points you got. (Point to you.)

it is well written, so well written that you can hear how each character speaks there lines, you can feel the emotion from the characters, you can understand what is happening in the story,the way glitch/ambrose is described when he is talking to cain makes you feel so sorry for him, the only mistake is that instead of putting himself when cain slams the door you have written myself, its only a small mistake, other than that the story is well written.

Well...that was unexpected. But still a good read. Just...very, very sad. Hmm.

Awe that's sad.

Adding to favs, awesome fic!