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Kkj
2008-10-03 . chapter 1
Wonderful story - I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. :)
janib
2008-08-13 . chapter 1
That was a wonderful story. So much emotion jam packed into a great story.
Trishkafibble
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
Aw, that was so sweet!! Rodney really does have that potential, to give his heart completely, and to lose it, too, in a quest for some way to strike back. And I like the way you've written this with its own balance of sweetness and pain, despair and hope. Lovely!
gabumon
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
man, this story was SO GOOD!! any chance of seeing a sequel to it to show future events?
sb4ever
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
It's a wonderful story taking elements from the different episodes and extrapolating a possible reality for our stalwart SGA characters. In any reality, Rodney's childhood must not have been a happy one but like Sheppard, he's found the family he's always needed in his Atlantis team. Nice job! P.S. I love the scene with Radek in the lab. That was heartwarming. Maybe a story with Radek and another character?
godsdaughter77
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
Nice story! It was interesting to see so much of Rodney's life.
Asugar
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
Very nicely done and quite sad. I like your portrayal of Rodney although it would have been cool to see if he succeeds and why the virus didn't work. Who is the mother of the kids whom Sheppard is a father to that you mention. You seem to imply in his conversation with McKay that he is still in love with and pining for Teyla.
trecebo
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
Great job on this. You keep Kaanan, which, awesome. He's kinda cool in a laid-back way. You didn't tell us about Shep's marriage, just rolled it by, another cool thing. No distractions there, right? Same with Ronon. Tres neato.
faldo
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
I've always loved It's a wonderful Life! Enjoyed your Atlantis take on it. Thanks.
highonstargate
2008-08-09 . chapter 1
That is a beautiful story! Loved every bit of it, especially when it is the ancients telling the story! Great Job!
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