 Deluded Visions 2008-09-05 . chapter 1I think you captured her issues and POV perfectly.
She is pretty much her control freak mother's puppet. And the people pleasing Juliet can and will never please her, no matter how hard she tries. Thus she wandered down that self destructive path, broken and fragile, still plastering that smile onto her face.
Nice little snippet, well written but any chance of perhaps a multi-chaptered fanfic? You were able to get so easily inside this character, you have massive potential. |
 lrigD 2008-08-18 . chapter 1I felt this was slightly OOC, but then again it's true: Juliet IS an actress. So there's not really a way of knowing what she really thinks.
Don't you just hate that mom?! In that episode when she came visiting, and the first thing she asked her daughter -her daughter!- was 'Are you watching your weight?' I could just throttle her.
Well, not useful - anyway, I liked this little piece, even if it was short :) Well done! |