   MissEMT 5/24/12 . chapter 15i know i haven't finished yet, but i just need to point out how incredibly good your story is. i think you've caught the characters, and your writing isn't sleazy as writing about sex can so easily become. amazing! |
| AvivaG 3/25/12 . chapter 17 Yay! No more vanilla sex! I think the eroticism of vampires (Thank you Anne Rice!) is so ingrained in the cultural mythology that this type of sex is inevitable in a good portrayal of vampires. Which means that, yes, I think this is very good example of the vampire!sex sub-genre and Twilight fan fiction. |
| Whittelily 3/16/12 . chapter 2 its great :) |
| inlovewiththeirlove 3/1/12 . chapter 20 i can never tell you how great a gift u have given 2 me and probably thousands of others. your story filled in the much needed intimacy that the books lacked. you may not have actually written the books, but, as far as i'm concerned bella and edward DO belong 2 u and because of u, they now fully belong 2 those who loved them.
Janae Robison |
| MiZpamier 2/28/12 . chapter 19 yeah, loved it! |
| MiZpamier 2/28/12 . chapter 20 this story is AMAZING, really, this is exactly what I've been missing in BD.
really thanks, for making the book complete for me now! |
| Edwardian-Rosebud 2/14/12 . chapter 14 This is so great! |
| GLee68 1/14/12 . chapter 3 Oh my word that is HOT!
The first two chapters had me fanning myself.
This one may have me going for a cold shower!
LOVED EPOV!
Yes I do agree that Edward would have a more extensive vocab than Bella.
I would add a FOURTH point. He is a 17yo boy who has been around for a LOT longer than 17 years!
He's "heard" and seen a lot more than even the most avid internet addicted teen-boy!
I think you've done a wonderful job interpreting the canon into something a whole lot more "satisfying" than the fade-to-grey. |
| Razeus1 12/23/11 . chapter 19 I've loved every chapter... however, This was the all time gut wrenching, chin wobbling, tear streaming BEST!
thanks |
| ladeerelli 12/20/11 . chapter 20 Thanks for the lemony sweetness! |
| Dangerlee 12/7/11 . chapter 20 Hey KatieBelle
thanks for a truly great story... not to mention your funny a-notes ;) |
| V-is-4-vampire 10/25/11 . chapter 3 wow! Only Bella can bring out 17yr old Eddie! |
| V-is-4-vampire 10/25/11 . chapter 2 wow...and it's a good thing i thought he was an ass man, lol! that was-hot,lol! |
| Aimee 10/14/11 . chapter 16 Bella and Edward keep riping eachothers clothes off. Arn't they going to run out of clothes offly fast if they keep doing that? |
| unknown 9/22/11 . chapter 18 this is such a sweet yet sexy story. i love it! |
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