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Sammylurvesyou
2009-05-06 . chapter 7
very nice update Raven
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-04-15 . chapter 7
Great job, as always. You do wonderfully with all the characters.

Guess they can tell the time travelers that dogs live a lot less than smurfs, and therefore Puppy is no longer around; it's a way to tell them the dog is gone without mentioning details of his death.

Keep the good writing.
Acela Smurf7
2009-04-14 . chapter 7
Splendid chapter, R. C. Especially the part where Handy gets curious about Thomas. And the stick-like thing that connects the wheels, they're called side-rods. Looking forward to more.
acosta perez jose ramiro
2009-03-19 . chapter 6
Amazing job with all the characters. The regular smurfs meeting their future selves and their fascination for technology is very well done.

Brainette likes Star Trek... guess she and Brainy have 'Live long and prosper' as a personal motto.

And Brainy snapping at his younger self was just perfect; after all, who's better to kick some sense into Brainy's thick skull than himself?

Keep the good writing.
Acela Smurf7
2009-03-08 . chapter 6
Wow, that was intensed. Can't wait to see more. I also can't wait to see that "special smurfling" that I requested for. Toodles!
HeatherFeather26
2009-03-05 . chapter 1
thanks for the review. you're's was 10 times more amazing
blueraven1999@yahoo.com
2009-02-05 . chapter 5
Sorry I missed reviewing the last chapter.
I didn't realize that you updated. Anyway great chapter.
I loved the Star Wars and Star Trek conversation.
The parts with Handy and Brainy were excellent.
Keep up the good work.
PapaSmurf
2009-01-30 . chapter 4
Very nice, you can certainly weave a tale..
Only noticed 1 spell error, the young Heafty's shirt, you wrote it was strip, I think you wanted to say stripe or striped.
swarlock
2009-01-30 . chapter 4
Loved in the In Joke about Frank Welker. My hero and favorite voice actor.
Acela Smurf7
2009-01-30 . chapter 4
Ooh, wonderful chapter, R. C. Can't wait to see more. :)
LIlApps
2009-01-03 . chapter 3
Please continue. All of your stories have been wonderful!
blueraven1999@yahoo.com
2008-12-14 . chapter 3
Good chapter. Keep up the good work.
Leesydreamy
2008-11-15 . chapter 3
This is awesome. Your write such good stories. Interesting how things are like with the smurfs and smurfetts in the far future.
Acela Smurf7
2008-11-13 . chapter 3
Oops! Forget my real name! It's me, Amtrak Smurf!
swarlock
2008-09-05 . chapter 2
I've a feeling that somehow The Time Traveling Smurfs will find out the truth in one way or another.

Good job.
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