 Richz 5/23/12 . chapter 23 Great story. |
 anon 5/14/12 . chapter 23 Delightful story that explores true friendship and blossoming love. Love driven by lust is only temporary while love driven by friendship will outlast the ages.
Even if the story is dead and it will be up to us to imagine the ending, what we have here was still enjoyable to read. Specially considering it was here where I first ever saw a tsundere Ryogachan.
Thank you for the long hours you have dedicated into the creation of this entertaining story. |
 CrypticMirror 3/5/10 . chapter 1I don't know if you ever even read these, but if you do. This is a great story. There just aren't that many Ryouga-chan fics out there, much less fics as good as this one. I hope one day you'll come back to this fic and write more. This is good. |
 Conor 2/12/10 . chapter 23 I don't know if you'll get this but you should finish this story brah, even if its just me who reads it. lol |
 Matsu 3/9/09 . chapter 23 Looks great! I just finished reading the fic and I gotta admit I'm impressed. I dont really review too often but this is a nice story. One note though, where is Genma on the Train? Is he in another part of the train to sleep or scam? Anyways you have some real skill in writing |
 Hat O' Doom 10/3/08 . chapter 23Wow this was a really good read. I could tell the writing was getting better with each chapter, always a good sign!
Looks like updates for this fic are long waits. Oh well, I'm willing to wait. Once again good read! |
 Srednasnhoj 4/22/08 . chapter 1Sigh another dead fic that I found intresting. |
 Deepdream 10/20/07 . chapter 23 What? That's it? You cannot be for real, can you?
Over two years Have already passed and you didn't update?
But why? The story's great!
Normally I hate it when Ryoga's made all weak and stuff but you found a way around it. You made him lose quite some of his physical strength and toughness alike but made him faster on the other hand.
Another thing however got my interest for real. And that's why I'm begging you to continue this story. To just take a seat in front of your PC, listen to some music and start writing the chapter 24 - that's what I'm begging you to do. I know an author sometimes needs to take his time planning out and writing a story. Often one author even rejects his creation and forgets it. Now however, I cannot allow that. This story is a masterpiece. Maybe it's not up to some stories regarding choice of language and vocabulary but that does not matter. What matters indeed is that the story sparked my interest about how thing are going to continue.
Is Akane slowly falling for Herb? What are Herb's feelings for Akane? Are Ryoga and Ranma going to become a couple? Is Ryoga's going to find his cure or will he reject the oppurtunity in favour of a future with Ranma?
You realize? There are many question which are not cleared, yet! That's why it is your duty to go on with this story and to bring it someday to an end! I do not wish to seem insolent but I wish for next chapter and I'm already looking forward to it.
So you better don't go and forget about my request!
Deepdream. |
 deitarionSSokolow 3/8/07 . chapter 23I hope you find time to get back to fanfiction. Your work is excellent and there's far too little fanfiction out there that features Manga-only characters. (I especially like stuff featuring the Musk Dynasty or the Phoenix Tribe) |
 Teldra 7/18/06 . chapter 23Will there be more of this please? Really great story! |
 Tuisto 7/12/06 . chapter 23This is a great retelling AU of the manga Herb incident! Ryouga stuck as a girl... and maybe a relationship with Ranma coming out of it? BRILLIANT! I don't think there are any other fictions that involve a possible RanmaRyouga-*CHAN* that are this original, this creative, or this well done and thought out.
And on a technical note, the writing style is just great, they way it moves and flows easily, very good grammar as well.
AA story.
Thanks and keep up the good work. |
 Bialaska 2/16/06 . chapter 23I like this story and look forward for more of it and especially the end. I hope that Ryouga gets the curse unlocked but not removed. Ranma and Ryouga, both with similar curses, would be a great couple! And they obviously know eachother better and trust eachother more than any of Ranma's fiancees. |
 FaytRain 1/25/06 . chapter 23you know, i LOVE THIS FICCY!
its been at least 5 years since you
started it... and over 1 year since you
updated! i hope you bring somthing that'll
make us... your loyal readers. HAPPY!
BWAH! PLEASE UPDATE! |
 katanbuilder3 11/6/05 . chapter 23 interesting. |
 Dr Facer 10/25/05 . chapter 23Good, good. I like this story, one of the best RanmaxRyoga fics I've found so far. Not my favorite couple (that's MoussexShampoo), but I find them very interesting when they're so well made. Congratulations, I can see you did a lot of research for this.
Now, there seems to be something here that I think would be great, and that's a potential AkanexHerb pairing. I mean, if I remember well, Herb himself states in the manga that the Musk currently only marry strong girls instead of turning animals into women. And since Akane is quite strong when jealous or otherwise motivated (anger, fear, etc). She would be a good bride for the Musk prince.
Now, that's something original that I would like to read. |