WOW! Just finished reading this and it is amazing! Love it!! This is a great story! And the ending... wow!!


Great job!

Hello!

I have spent nearly a full day reading this story (not all at once, mind you--I started late last night, slept, went to work, then when I got home I pretty much read straight until now ;) and must say that I am in love with this story.
I stumbled across it after a late night viewing of Labyrinth and the sudden craving for more.
Honestly, I'm always stunned to find such beautiful works on this site after seeing my fair share of disasters! I fell in love with your characters and felt their pain, excitement, and love.

All in all, I adore this story. The only thing I was unsure of was the end. I'm intending to read the sequel (of course) but I'm not sure how I feel about the new direction this story will obviously have to take. I guess I shouldn't judge until I read it's companion though!

I've very excited to start the sequel (which I will likely do after a little break) and will tell you how I'm feeling!!

You are definitely very talented and I'm so glad to have stumbled across your work!

Best of luck!

WOW! AWESOME STORY! Gonna go read the sequel right now!

"Funny thing about the Fae, you never knew where you stood with them: one day it was death by the Nippers for not tying your shoe, and the next it was a shrug for revealing state secrets."

Hilarious! Best line ever!

Augh!*stomping, while pacing back and forth* You just had to leave to leave off there! I'm just glad thet you have started the sequil allready, or I would go crazy with wanting to know what happens next. ...Is Jareth the minotaur?

Best story ever.

What a wonderful story!

I stayed up late reading this.

I'm looking forward to reading the next, which i will be doing now!

wow! I am very impressed by this story, I couldn't stop reading it. I loved how you used Shakespeare as well as a little greek mythology, it really made this fanfic stand out and be a lot better than most if not all of the labyrinth fanfics I have read. The part of the story with the Satry's took me by serprise, there near the end. I had a feeling the story was going to end on sad note. I wanted to cry when Jareth became mortal. I was very pleased to find that u are currently witing the sequel. I want very much to read it, but I wont until u finish it. So many ppl never finish their stories and I don't want to start readif yours if that happens. I'm hoping you will, cuz i HAVE to kno what happens to jareth and Sarah! Any way good job on this story and your terrific writer. I'm favoriting you ^_^ Oh and when i start the other story I promise to leave lots of good reviews.

Jareth is such a complete Bastard. I hope Sarah finds a way to get revenge in later chapters. Something to wipe the smug look off his face! well on to the next chapter. good job!

Hey I think your first chapter is good, it kept me entertained. I like the idea of a darker Jareth. Poor Sarah.

sigh.

this is still one of my favourite labyrinth stories. i fall in love with the more i re-read it. i am, of course, eagerly and anxiously awaiting the sequel.

and i love loreena. (stolen child, i think, being one of my favourites.)

That was a very enjoyable fanfic!
You pretty much stuck to the characters, but developed them in your own way. I really appreciated that. Shows you're talented because you didn't stray off from the original characters but gave them your own spice. (:

Excited to read the next installment. (:

That was simply wonderful. Wonderful wonderful-- one of the best Labyrinth fanfics I have ever read, if not the best. I don't have much time now, but you should expect me to review various other chapters with my notes, thoughts, etc. A lot of the details, themes, emotions, etc, really got to me. You pretty much avoided all the traps of a Labyrinth fanfic, and wrote something that is utterly beautiful and emotionally true.

I know you don't read this fic's reviews anymore but I just want to say:

I find your fic to have given a significant contribution to Labyrinth fandom and have added it to my archive, Labyrinth Classics.

If you have any suggestions for fics that are not on the list but you consider to be Labyrinth classics give me a ring.

Also, on a more personal note. I look forward to the sequal immensly. The darkness you brought you these characters is absolutely enchanting. I have to admit the concept of becoming addicted to fae is lovely. It's not often I see a newer fic that I think qualifies as a classic, but this one fits the bill. Great job!

This is actually a review for the whole story. I loved it! It's nice to see them fall in love gradually, as opposed to a one-shot where they simply hop into bed. (not that those aren't fun!) Keep up the great work, can't wait for you to write a sequel.