Hey,

I got to thinking after we chatted and so I came to your page and checked out your stories. Lo-and-behold, I never read this chapter! I've been so busy with school lately and I think I might have got a sneak peak at this chapter and forgot to read the rest or something. Anyways, sorry this is so terribly late.

I'm really curious about Amber, she's so strange it's delicious. I definitely can't wait until we find out more on what's going on with her and her role. However, I do feel bad for her. Everyone thinks she's insane, creepy, or trouble, lol. It's tough being the hero.

Once, again.. I know I say this everytime I review but I just adore Ian. He's so witty and plays such a dominant role in this story, which isn't normally portrayed so it's so interesting to read. I (heart) him.

Sorry this can't be longer but I gotta do some chores around here and finish up some work for tomorrow. Good luck with the writing.

Looking forward to chatting with you soon,
Sasha

[can't be bothered to log in xD]
I'm really intrigued by this one~~! Really different from your other stories, and ~~ yeah~~ Might have said it before, but yeah~~ xD
Didn't realise it was a fantasy story, and it's just really interesting~ Don't find these sort of stories much~ ... ><
Can't wait 'til your next update~!

This story keeps me curious about whats going on. At least now I have a clear view why amber is doing it since she told mr dickenson. I love your Ian. He's such an idiot with his camcorder. haha.

Update soon~!

suppity,

Amber seems so different then she was in smells like team spirit and for some reason she's not my favourite character as she was in SLTS. She has been replaced with Ian. I am starting to like more and more now. GO IAN!

Love Pixie Girl or as my penname says Lazy Chick

suppity d dog,

i like the summary, the story and i now respect ian. Keep upthe good work!

Luv Pixie girl

Choked on a toothbrush! - Everytime I read that you know you make me laugh!! Funniest thing is I can totally see that happening to Brooklyn.
Once again, I love your work. I love how Amber isn't an overbearing O.C
Brooklyn and Mystel are IC so far, so I hope that continues, but knowing you it will
The rest of the story is progressing very nicely. I love seeing some of the other characters get some attention =]
Keep up the really great work! =]

hey hey!
lol so I'm reviewing but I haven't finished reading. I can't believe I missed the last three chapters. haha. So i'ma go read and then I'ma review again! lol

aww zadien don't say that! lots are reviewing or rather reading but we are lazy, but I'm sure you'll get more reviews.

brb, give or take a few days, there's a lot to read,
ttyl.

This is getting really interesting. I like it so far,then again i'm pretty sure I like all your Beyblade stories. Your a great author. I'm just wondering since you mentioned Arista in this chapter,are the rest of your oc's going to be in this story too?

Hey, I just read your Note.
I'm sorry that this is my first time reviewing. Should've reviewed earlier, huh? I have a habit of reviewing after I finish reading all of the posted chapters.

Great story though. It's really interesting. :)
I could tell you put a lot of effort into your story.
Great plot. Great humor. Great grip on the characters.
Basically, great.
Oh, and great summary too.

I laughed so much when I read the conversation between Hilary, Tyson and Max.

Mystel and Brooklyn's conversation was nice. I didn't know it was Brooklyn Mystel was talking to though, only hint was in the end when you mentioned his red hair. Or maybe I just missed something.

Keep up the good work.

As always, absoulutly wonderful and inspiring!

wayhey :) Finally getting around to doing this. It is such a pleasure to be reading your writing all over again :D Couldn't believe how quickly I found myself submersed with the story. You have definitely re-lit my fanfiction flame!

I'm still a bit confused as to the entire situation, yet its an oddly appealing trait at the same time - this side of mystery is something I gotta say I'm enjoying, and yet the general banter and humour is still present =]

Really am looking forward to the next update - along with SLTS and TFG. Hope its all going well!

Aw, thanks for the mention :) I think we're now in the top 7 most popular Beyblade forums now ^_^

Glad you updated. As someone previously said, it was certainly worth the wait. I've noticed, the longer the story takes to update, the better it is.

I'm still very impressed that you manage to keep all the characters in character. It's a rare thing these days unfortunately.

Ha ha, Kenny still has a crush on Ming Ming! Lol, funny nickanme - Geekboy. I can fully picture Ming Ming talking about her career...

Mystel! Liked his conversation with Brooklyn. Kai fainted six times? That I did not know. Guess you learn something new everyday.

Looking forward to your next update!

Later,
glitteredvixen06

Wow, this was definately worth the wait :D
The first scene was absolutely hilarious, I loved it...jealous Tyson is so cute, and Max seems to be the only one that knows what's going on! Will he be getting any lovin in this fic?
I really love your writing style, everyone is very in character - something that I know I have a problem with! I forgot all about this story 'til the alert came up in my inbox, so I reread it all again :D Always good to rediscover a gem!
Looking forward to future chapters!
Linx

woo! Love your work as always ^^ Can't wait for the next chapters to come out. And Beyblades shouldn't die, yours are the only fics I read anymore, just because they're my favourites and always have the kind of humor to make me laugh.

I'm still not really sure where this is going, bit I'm glad to see that you're still updating.