Love the story! Frankly, though, i love them all ^_^
i like the fact that there was a touch of romance...nothing to heavy, which can be a good thing! it actually can make the fic much better...so i think...that is kind of a hypocritical statement coming from me, though...i REALLY like to write the romance stuff!

anyway, i really hope you write more FMP fanfics...

Pretty good, though I think I expected more interaction between Sousuke and Kaname. Great story though ad very well written.

I hope you write more stories for this couple!

Sg

Again you've managed to amaze me with your talent. This was truly a fantastic piece of work GA. It started out grim with Sousuke returning from a war zone after having witnessed the death of all of his comrades. He'd had enough and rather than return to Tuatha de Daanan, his intended destination, he redirected his flight towards Tokyo to his safe house, the only place he wanted to seek refuge and near Kaname Chidori. I was glad that you had Captain Testarossa put her feelings aside in order to support Sousuke's decision; not wanting the man she loved to have a charge of insubordination placed on him, even if her feelings for him weren't reciprocated. And when Sousuke arrived and found Kaname there waiting for him as if knowing he'd show up sooner or later, I just melted. You really know how to end a story. Again, great work my friend.

This story is very well written. You picked a good moment and wrote about it so gracefully. I really hope to read more of your work.

very cute. well done