I know you finished this a little while ago, but I stopped by to read it because for some reason I never did before, and OH MY GOD, it's AMAZING. I mean I don't even want to write Jokachel anymore, yours is just too effing good! Ok well that's kind of a lie, but still, damn. And all your INCREDIBLE youtube vids, ahh, I hate you. And of course by that what I really mean to say is I love you!!

wonderful story. i loved the fact that you kept him in character i hate stories where the characters take one look at each other and fall in love.

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Oh. My. God.

The end of this chapter was so shocking. I never saw it coming! Great twist!

Great chapter. Very intense especially the sex scene. Very well written.

Oh my god, that was so sad. Can't believe Harvey's sister is dead. I absolutely love the way you are writing the Joker, it's so dark and creepy. Love it!

Ooh, loved this chapter so much! Especially the line -"Those eyes...it couldn't be..."

Will he figure out it's Rachel?

Now I am done with this one, haha. Really awesome, both of the stories just seamlessly flowed and just plain worked. You never had to reach incredibly far to make something work... it all just worked! Thanks for making this such an enjoyable read : )

omg this was so good! i was so sad to see the joker go tho... :( ... but it couldn't end any other way. so i was thinking...

is it good that the Joker/ Jack died before he could "dispose" of Rachel? i mean she did not know that he wanted to kill her (if that's what he was intending to do on their little "date") and so she can live with the thought that they could've lived happily ever after... i dunno , maybe i'm digging too deep.

but i did LOVE it that she was pregnant!! i was hoping against all hope that he wasn't really dead. that somehow he'd come back. but i do love it that she will always have a part of him with her. but it is so sad that Joker/ Jack will never know :(

do you think that the Joker really loved her? at first i only saw their relationship as full of lust (which was very nice ^_~)but throughout this story i do believe that Joker did have the emotion of love awaken inside of him. i almost started crying when she was laying with him as he was dying, begging him to not leave her, and he placed his hand on her head-- that was the saddest/sweetest/most beautiful thing EVER!

ok this review is obnoxiously long so i'm gonna stop, say, "GREAT JOB!!" and go on to read your other stories now!

Wow, I dunno why I didn't read this sooner, but wow, I loved this. It ends very nicely. Cannot wait to read Jack's Descent. Bet it's amazing! *sigh* I really need to update Jester and Lawyer... the next chapter should be good... anyway! Great job!

remember me? hahaha... ^^;

im sorry that i left! i was in a play, which made my life CRAZY and i didnt get on for TWO MONTHS! holy crap!

i cant believe he died. this is the first joker fanfic ive read that he died...

i cried. i SOBBED! and then i was reminded of heath, so then i cried even more, because somehow i just see them as two different people.

like, seriously. i was sobbing like crazy. im still crying a little now. i actually had to get up and look at my cardboard joker cutout to see if he was still there! i managed to stop crying when i saw him, because he was wearing a santa hat! (i want him to dress up for the holidays!)

wow, after reading all that i wrote, i TOTALLY dont sound crazy at all! heh heh...

Fantastic stories xD!

Aw...it's not lame :( I thought it was rather touching. Great ending, you've down a brilliant job with this! You are a very talented author and I'll definitely be keeping up with your other stories!

Wow, that was a surprise!! A good one though..well, not a good one..cause he died...you know what I mean lol, you pulled it off! This has been an amazing story, and I'm glad you didn't end it all happily because that wouldn't have been very realistic. Wonderful chapter!

I must make a declaration of randomness! After I finished reading the story (awsome btw) it just occurred to me: joker reminds me of the antagonist in the cowboy bebop movie. They'r both too clever for their own good, carry a switch blade, and they're both terrorists who are completely off their rockers:D oh and they both have this kinky thing for women and furniture...*cough* anyways, superb story, makes me want to go a bit mad myself haha

OMG, I can't believe its over. And I know what you mean, the endings always hard to write, so don't worry if you think it ended up lame or something, its the thought that counts!

Personally, I loved the idea how Rachel said "I've been holding onto his ashes for a week now, and I know Jack would hate being in one place for the rest of his life. If I don't let him go now, I'll...I'll never be able to."

That. Was. Beautiful. Explains the Joker/Jack perfectly. Also, for some reason I could kind of guess Rachel would end up pregnant, call it a sixth sense (Or a conclusion reached from reading too much fanfiction), but it really added something to the end of the story.

Anyways, thanks so much for an excellent story! Can't wait to read more of your fantastic work!