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Lady AnomAli
2008-08-10 . chapter 1
lol Dude Where's My Car. xD What a place to start.

I like it, it's a pretty good opening and a cool idea.

I also like how Sam and Tom are like, perpetually fighting. I'll definitely check in for the second chapter.
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