Uh-oh. Starfire is gonna get into so much trouble with Robin. And I have a feeling that she's ging to regret letting Lotus go after she sees what happened to Cyborg.

Haha. "She's headig down hall D-"? I'm gonna have to name all the hallways in my house now cause of that..

oh this is classic... ok so i didn't see that one coming. Still i can see the resoulution. Lotus finds Akimil, beats the crap out of him but finds that she cannot kill him because of "some misplace sense of righteousness" (Joker in the Dark Knight as he swinging upside down).

It would be fun though if she accidentally killed him or Akimil would commit suicide in a "I'd rather die than be captured!" style...

I await the next chapter eagerly. Now if you'll excuse me...
MY NAME IS MICHAEL JAY CABOOSE AND I EAT BABIES!!

that is one hell of trick she did to Cyborg. Heh, Lotus, you go girl!

Good Lord. I finaly found time to read and review this. Okay, one thing I absoluely loved about this chapter was the Cyborg/Lotus kiss. Hahaha. ... Sorry. I was totally looking forward to that. Now that Lotus got away, all hell's gonna break loose, isn't it? This is getting so good.

Ah so it was the mother. Thought so.

Ok who was it? Her brother/sister? Her mother? A very good friend? Who did Akimil dice up for her to want to find him so much?

Hey, don't worry about the shortness of the chapter. At least you put up something. And we didn't even have to wait too long. I have stores that I haven't updated in four or five months...ha...
Okay, short, but sweet in my opinon. This story is getting more tense, and I'm getting more anxious! I'm waiting as patiently as I can...

Oohoo a metahuman eh? Telekinesis... huh dunno, that power seems to be as overused as flying. No offense. And it's funny cause it seems she's not really expcerienced at using it either.

Oh my... gruesome. A human?! Wow, and here we all thought the Joker wasa psycho. heh. Good thing you didn't go and describe the scene in too much detail. I have a very... active mind when it comes to written descriptions... ughghg...

Cross: 'smiles evilly' FINALLY! A fic about a sadist or a killer! MUAHAHAHA!
Sally: You got it bro! 'high-fives him'
Gabriel: Why, oh why do I have to have a family of devils in my head?!
Hadriel: HEY! I may be their brother, but I'm not a devil!
Cross: 'evil laugh' Heh, on to the next one... GORE! MUAHAHAHA!

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Dude, I love your dialogue. You're very good at writing character interactions. :Applauds:
Wow, Lotus is such a hypocrite. She's all angry at her mother cause she had an addiction to drugs, but Lotus has an addiction to revenge...Hmm, wonder what Robin will decide. He'll prolly throw her in jail, but then she'll escape (duh). Well, that's how I see it. Can't wait!

Something bad? Oh, wow, don't tell me Lotus killed her mother. That's pretty bad. Or maybe Akimil killed her; that might be the reason Lotus hates him so much. Eh, I'll see. Looking forward to the next chapter, so hurry!

Wow, that was one hell of a beating. I actually feel sorry for this Red Fist guy. It's kinda depressing how Lotus wnet over the edge, and for what? Heh, I can sense a lot of tension coming up in the next chapter.

Whoa Ho, that was cool. Very organized fight scene in this chapter; most fight scenes I read get kind of confusing after a while. Lotus herself has become quite an interesting character. I'm curious about the extent of her powers, and what her slight interest in Cyborg is. Just make sure that you don't turn her into a Mary Sue, because I'm starting to like her. Looking forward to the next chapter.

Huh, what do you know, Robin was more cooperative than I expected. That's good, that's good. You're keeping me on my toes. Awaiting the next chapter.