Oh man! Reno and Axel my hero! I love how you write them but then that’s not a surprise since characterization is your specialty. The fact that they’re brothers makes it even better.

I love it when you introduce new characters just because it’s such a treat to see how you portray them.

There were so many awesome lines in this chapter. I loved this: “They name’s Lea,” he drawls. “Spelled L-E-A, but pronounced ‘lay’ – as in ‘good for a’.”

Also the whole chemistry with Yuffie, Axel, and Reno was just so well done.

Keep up the amazing work!

Oh you didn't! *rereads* Oh you did! Axel when he was a somebody appears! I always knew those two were related. His name always gives me trouble though. They must have named him before coming up with the rearranged name with an x thing. I named him Lae, personally. Not a whole lot you can do with his name. And he would very much suit being a Turk. I like how you keep relating the events to Kairi's age though. How old was she when she went to Destiny Islands again?

Anyway, just occured to me that I've been faithfully stalking your fic all this time and haven't given you any means for reply.

Aaskghadgdg, Kairi's FIVE now? How time flies (sort of). Crap... One more year to go, then.

Man, Leon's really really trying, isn't he? Well, at least he warned them. ‘mistreating the poor genetically abnormal emu’ knocked my socks off.

For some weird reason, my mind went to Reno immediately after reading the title. I was not expecting Lea to be introduced that way, but he and Reno make interesting brothers. And Turks, too. Their double teaming Leon was funny. The de facto defense leader gets really pissy around troublemakers, doesn't he? And Yuffie and Lea are kinda cute. XD

There are a few small kinks like missing punctuation marks, but they're totally minor and the chapter's still great!

Holy moly, Axel's here! *Ahem* I mean...Lea...yes...him...

And we all /know/ what happens to him - can't wait for the dramatics there!

And I can't believe this is chapter 57...this story sure has come a long way!

Keep up the fantabulous work, hon!

Reno and Lea remind me of Connor and Murphy from Boondock Saints...but that could just be because the sequel came out and I have them on the brain.

Ah... Here's hoping that he heard her. That'd be kinda nice, if it works out like I hope. Hmm... Love this story!!

E, is this Zack/Aerith? I hope it is. This story is just going from one leg of the Z/A/C triangle to the other.

But, this story is so good. Sorry I haven't been reviewing. My PSP doesn't let me review stories anymore. I don't know why. :/

Man I love Yuffie. Sometimes I should channel her. And as for Cait...

Ah **, I've been keeping an eye out for Sephiroth on the horizon since I know the bugger's out there, and now I'm puzzling through that damn prophecy and figuring things out.

Just got one thing to say. Please don't kill Zack again? Poor guy dies enough in fandom already. And he's really adorable?

I love how ominous everything is! As if it's slowly heading toward KH..the prophecy is very creepy to me. I noticed that Cait said Cloud was the WARRIOR, but it looks like the warrior and the swordsman might separate people, even if Cloud doesn't think so..

So..maybe the swordsman would be Zack? And I read it like his two lovers, Aerith and Cloud, would..forget him?

D: You know we're just waiting to see how you get everyone all split up in the end.. D: I'm already starting to wonder if you'll focus on them DURING the game, or even if all of them will make the trip..!

Wow, another amazing chapter- but I've come to expect nothing less :) Poor Yuffie! She is so young and confused and hormonal... and poor Leon! Who is probably equally confused!

You are killing me with this foreshadowing... but I have hope- because of the "will love again" part... maybe? I hope?

I am getting restless! Anyways, I'm on the edge of my seat as always in anticipation for another fabulous installment!

:D!

A DEFINITIVE SIGN OF DARKER THINGS TO COME? HELL YES.
I've been waiting for it for ages... The prophecy's so worrisome - don't tell me Cloud'll be forgotten or something? That bit really worries me ;_;

Aw, Yuffie... It's not like she did anything wrong (more than usual, anyway), and it stings to not know for certain why Leon suddenly gives her the cold shoulder.

I wonder what's up with Leon. It seems like he's hiding secrets or something. Anyway poor Yuffie. I loved her getting the best of the theif king.

Please update soon!

I was honestly afraid to read this chapter due to the title, but I realized that was ridiculous and I couldn't just hide from the bits I don't like.

You started it out very nicely, all sorts of amusing bits and a real insight into the true ninja that Yuffie is. Her interactions with the Thief King kept me giggling and her developing friendship with Penelo is endearing.

I'm glad to see more interactions between her and Cloud but that last bit with Leon absolutely KILLED me. I hope you don't keep us waiting too long on the next chapter, I'm worried about poor Yuffie and how she's going to react.

And man, Leon is some kind of **. I don't care his reasons for doing things some of the things he said was so mean. I hope this doesn't go on for too long =(

Dude! Does Leon finally like her?! Or has he just noticed her feelings, nah I doubt that, I think he likes her. To bad he's socialy retarded. I loved Yuffie taking down the Thief King. Damn I just love Yuffie, she kicks **! Squal just needs to suck it up and kiss her already. Stubborn fool.

Great story. ^__^