I love happy endings...especially when Kal and Diana are concerned. Ron, you know you're a fantastic writer!!

Really liked the story, wish it had been longer though. She worked up the courage do to something she had held back for years in a relatively short period of time. I would of liked if the Power Girl/Kara thing could of went somewhere, it just seemed like a wasted opportunity once I read the end and it left me wanting.

Going by the first chapter of Not According to Script and a few parts of Another Point of View you can obviously write comedy very well, so I wish you had taken the option of having Power Girl make with the googly-eyes at Superman to mess with and push Diana.

No matter though, still a really good piece and I look forward to any future SM/WW pieces.

I enjoyed that. Sort of like shipper-crack. Just without the lasting effects (not that I would know). Glad you threw Kara and PG in there. The dialogue and hijinks were funny. I liked Diana's protectiveness and her "gradual" coming to terms. If only that would actually happen, and if only the two of them would be so direct, but I digress.

Great fic!

Hey,Ron,As you know I liked this story.If I had one critique...maybe a little bit longer?Ha.I like that Diana opened her heart and Clark opened his eyes.

A hint...Interlude in the Dark is a winner...not cause it is mature but cause of the very clever way it is written and the ending where you went...whoa...so farmboy ain't so much of a saint eh.

Hint.Hint.

As Batman says- About damn time! I was gonna ask you when you were planning on getting back to this, but with the ruckus over Personal Business, I was afraid you'd kill me for it, LOL.

Great ending to a great fic, and I love your use of humour in your writing, this time with the two Karas and Wally. The conversation was beautifully thought out, and you were the ideal candidate to write this fic. I'm pretty tickled at he prospect of the two troublemaking (but well-meaning) girls getting a dressing down from Bruce, yikes!

All in all another great fic from an exceptionally talented author. Good job! Us Bad Boys (tm) need to stick together pal.

Well, I felt the ending was a tad rushed but otherwise a pretty good one. Although part of me wonder what kind of punishment Supergirl and Power Girl will get from Bruce. Anyways, it was also good to see Clark and Diana FINALLY admit how they felt to each other. All in all, a very good story! I give it 4.5 out of 5 stars.

And so Supergirl and Power Girl start their rumor mill (and probably a new fantasy life for Wally, too). Even though their description of Lois was part of it, knowing how she is it probably wasn't far from the truth anyway. Since Batman was listening in also, I wonder what he's going to do about it. Well, time to see how this all lays out in the next chapter!

Supergirl and Power Girl plotting and planning over Clark and Diana... I smell a super-powered "Parent Trap" coming on...

BTW, Superman/Power Girl?!? It would've been a cute idea if it weren't for the fact that her cousin is a version of himself from Earth-2. That's just... ususually awkward.

Well, time for another chapter to feast on.

Hm... well, it's nice to see Power Girl giving Diana some comfort over Superman. It's also nice to hear her acting almost like a best friend to Supergirl, even though they're technically the same person thanks to a certain Crisis that shall remain nameless. Anyways, time to head to the next chapter!

I read the original version of this story at Wondercat's/IMFanci's site and liked it then. Now I can finally say how much I did! Flash still has his trademark sense of humor and Diana, unlike the actual series, is in character. Anyway, I'm still wondering why a JLU story was never made like this. Heading off to the next chapter now!