 MissPriss11120 2008-08-12 . chapter 11Wow. I just read this story from start to finish and I've got to say, it's absolutely amazing. You're obviously a very talented writer. I love the desperation and need Jason and Elizabeth have for each other in this story, it's so intense and real. The love scenes were phenomenal, they didn't come across as trashy or cheesy, which happens so often in stories. They way you described their feelings and the situation itself was perfect. You made it believable, which is quite a feat to me because an affair is something I could never see Jason doing. This is a fabulous story and I'm so glad to have found it, thank you for this wonderful read.
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