Wow, Cat's power is sadistic. I like it.

GREAT CHAPTER!

Whoa, that was awesome...

Poor Blossom :(

...That was supposed to say soon. I am not calling you "son." Just so you know.

Augh your cliffhangers! Dx Post the next chapter son

BUT... as for this chapter... I'm so excited we got to see Cat's special power. And it's really cool! I love the fact that she doesn't seem to be able to control/understand it very well. If I'm understanding this right, she used it on the teacher but wasn't aware she was using it? And since the teacher ended up dying, that sheds a new perspective on my earlier reviews where I said the media was just exaggerating things and Cat didn't really do anything wrong... but if she still didn't know she was doing it... I guess it's more complicated than "Cat did something wrong" or "Cat didn't do anything wrong." That's why I love this story. Unless of course my interpretation of those events is totally wrong xD;

Oh yeah... and I suspected that Cat's power would have something to do with like... sound waves... but I didn't want to say that because I wasn't sure how to explain what I meant and thought it might sound stupid. BUT I WAS RIGHT

I'm really looking forward to seeing the next chapter. I think it'll be interesting to see the conflict because Cat seems more morally ambiguous than Jojo, so she'll probably be more open to both sides, unlike Jojo who sort of got into her own world full of crazy Jojo logic. But of course, it'll still be a bunch of people trying to sway Cat to their side. I think what Cat really needs is some kind of spiritual journey to figure herself out on her own. :P

ALSO, I like the flashbacks cuz I have a bad memory lol.

Wicked f u c k i n g chapter! Cat's power is...totally not what I was expecting but totally bad a s s.

If you're wondering about the awkward spacing, I'm trying to jump the profanity filter to properly express my joy with this chapter.

I am dying to see what's coming next :D This is nice.

Well, now this is a sight! Cat and Jojo in conversation, bonding even, after a fasion. Well, I for one can hardly wait for more. Though Deus Ex Procella's oneshot off this one was both heart-rending and wonderful in my opinion, this story could go any witch way and still have my full attention!

I'm happy to say the latest chpater rocked and I look forward to much more!

Your Humble Servant,

Isumo1489

very good.

i'm glad you didn't forget this story.

I'm not sure you should have split this up, it seemed kinda short to me. But at least that means the next update should be pretty soon.

Haha, I bet Cat is really confused by Mojo being Jojo's "father." Then again, that kind of thing probably could actually happen in the PPG universe :P

Did you draw that birthday picture? Or was it mentioned in Villain? Or did I just imagine it?? I could have sworn you drew it before, but I couldn't find it on your dA xD;
And this made me laugh: "He was some sort of green, monkey monster, obviously." OBVIOUSLY.

I really like how much research you put into this, with the sign language and stuff.

"She spoke with so much passion, it was hard to not feel sympathetic towards her." I think your readers would agree. :P I said in previous reviews of this that Jojo seems more crazy and less sympathetic in the third-person POV. But this chapter reminded me of how much I like her and how the stuff she says kinda makes sense..

I really like the interactions between Cat and Jojo. Cat is such an interesting character and I'm really looking forward to seeing how she deals with all the conflict, because at this point I think Blossom and Jojo are both just trying to push her towards certain things, and Cat doesn't really know what she wants or what's right for her, since she hasn't really gotten an unbiased viewpoint from anyone. I mean, even though she decides to stay with the villains at the end of this chapter, she still seems reluctant and like she's not really doing it because she wants to be a villain... she just needs a place to stay and she's trusting that what Jojo says is right.

I also really like the fact that Jojo is both "evil" and "a good person" (at least in Cat's eyes). It's cool because there's pretty clear-cut "good" and "evil" in the PPG universe/this fic, but there's still some gray area and there's more to evil than just... EVIL. Umm... I dunno if that made any sense. But you probably know what I mean? xD

is cat's power going to be like jojo's? or will it be awesomer? that would be cool

Whoo! Update! Awesome Chapter.

I feel sorry for Cat. All these people trying to change her and she can't become who she wants to be. It's like she's stuck in between Blossom and Jojo, a hero and a villain and she has to make a choice sooner or later whether she likes it or not.

This is a really good sequel to a very good story and...I don't know what else to say. You're a very talented writer and this is one of the most unique stories in the fandom. Great job and keep it up!

nice to see a new chapter after so long. i thought you had died or something(it happens).this is one of the only still going dark PPG fics still going right now. keep going with this great idea.

Yes, yes, yes! That was enlightening. Rewording of everything that occurred in Villain, but still enlightening to actually hear it phrased out loud rather than by Jojo's limited world view.

What I found most interesting is that it still seems like Cat isn't sold entirely. Maybe I rushed through (work in about ten minutes, boo) but it seems more like...she likes what Jojo is saying and is only meeting her terms to hear more.

Granted Cat is also getting Jojo's biased world view, but I can't blame her for accepting it. It's the only one she's ever been presented. Blossom seems to focused on sheltering Cat, and her sisters, to really explain her side of things.

Also, dammit, having to wait for the power reveal :P Oh well, I'll keep my head spinning so that when it is revealed I can shout a resounding "DOH!" from it being anything but what I thought.

Looking at your DA page, what's that I spy? Blossom telling her side to Cherry? Is the end of the world finally upon us or are we finally getting an alternative view of Villain? Hurrah either way!

Really, if you want my honest opinion, what strikes me so strongly about this fic is that...Cat isn't really given the chance to develop her own world view, her own opinion on things, because Blossom and Jojo are pushing their side onto her.

Being the rabid Rise Against fanboy that I am, I always get the song Paper Wings stuck in my head when I consider Cat's story. Specifically one line, where Tim McIlrath really captures her situation.

"Is this the life that you lead, or the life that's lead for you? Will you take the road that's been laid out before you?"

Now i am begining to think cat hates her other mother.Wow,that felt strange to say.Anyways,so Buttercup-I mean Jojo-is her mother?[I said it was strange cause it reminds me of Coraline.]
Make more soon