o ur so right - the chapters are getting better

i prefer this over diary entries, even tho those were good, this is better :D

and eriols a riot...good work on portraying him like this

So sweet of Syaoran to do that for Sakura - but I really enjoyed ur Sakura and Kazu (i think that's his name) scene

I'm glad Sakura got her own back!!

So far your story is great - but when I'm reading about the same events from different points of views it seems to get a bit repetitive.

Maybe u could put more of what that person's feeling at the time of the event instaed of reciting what happened.

I find that in this chapter ur Sakura POV is much better than the Syaoran one because for most of the entry it feels like Syaoran is repeating what has already been described by Sakura

Anyways - I really love the story and am impressed that you've written so much for it.

That's a really good story!! *wipes away tears* Some grammatical errors, but wonderful anyway!

Yes~

I think that you should make a sequel to Written. It was a wonderfully designed and had a great story line to it ^______^ Hope to read some more stories from you =]

~Kasumi

OMGosh!!! that was an AMAZING story! I couldn't keep my eyes off it!! I really hope you right another story about what happens to sakura and syaoran when they get to hong kong :D unless you already have .. lol! keep up the great work!

-victoria

Yes you should write a sequel! That was very good. I'm putting it on my favorite list! I'd like to hear what happens to Sakura and Syaoran in Hong Kong. You should say how her mother reacts, what it's like at her new school, and her friends are doing without her. Oh yeah biggest thing, HOW TOUYA REACTS! Lol! E-mail me

Whew, tears out. That is sure lovingly and I love it!!!

^_^ I know I'm reviewing alot but, I keep reading it since I love it too much. In the 20th chapter, Shaoran says he's giving Sakura something at the airport but didn't, wasn't he supposed to? I just saw the change you made to ch. 12, it really does make sense now. Except for something which is in the last review. You really did a wonderful job. You have a good imagination!^_^

"Written" was fantastic. You have a talent for writing. I think you really should write a sequel to it. Keep writing, keep smiling, and believe in yourself.

I love the idea of a sequal to Written!!! It was the greatest!!

I loved it, I loved it all, sat down and readit straight through... any more for us... Digimon is also good. *grins*

Hey, sorry, I forgot something last time I reviewed ^_^;. WEll, isn't it weird that Sakura is the Mistress of the CLow Cards meaning she has them all, and Shaoran uses the Time Card to freeze time? What happened there? Sakura could've used the Time instead. I like the idea of the telepathic thing, very creative, same with Sakura and Mei's argument.There is a sequal!!!!!???????????????? (I'm reading the reviews right now) What's the name?????????? I'm dying to read it now....I'm gonna go find out...good job!

That was great, but you should do a sequal.

sequel! sequel! sequel! but can it just be ordinary mush with no really big problems between S+S, you don't HAVE to do it, it's just a request....Written was GrEAT and FANTASTIC though

Well, I just read the WHOLE thing, and I just LOVED it! I really like reading fan fics, especially on Sakura and Shaoran. I have noticed one flaw in this story though. Well, Fujitaka said Sakura's magic wouldn't effect him as he is part of Clow Reed, but then why would it work when Sakura used "Float" on Eriol-kun? Please, if you decide to change the story to be true to what Fujitaka said, PLEASE DO NOT TAKE OUT THE PARTS WHERE SAKURA FLOATS ERIOL!!!!!!!!!!!!! THOSE PARTS WERE SIMPLY HILARIOUS!!!!!!!!!! Other than that, I really loved this story and please tell me if there is a sequal or you write any new stories, I would love to read them (as long as it's CCS and SS) OK? I really enjoyed it.
P.S. If ne one emails me, please put something I will recognise in the subject line as I delete emails from people I don not know or I have no clue what it's about thanx!!!!!