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wolfen princess14
2009-08-23 . chapter 25
Very nice, you write amazingly (though I know that's probably very bad grammer.) I love how you started simply, got the point quickly, and ended just as simply but still getting the point through. A lot of the stories had me saying 'I never thought of that' even though I did laugh aloud at some.

I would love to read an multi-chapter story by you, as you have a wonderful style and keep everyone in character. The only thing I'm bummed about is that I can't comment on every one-shot but that's because I'm lazy and don't feel like writing twenty-five reviews. Oh well, that's on me...Keep writing, and good luck with those 10 themes!

~Wolfen Princess14
TambalaiAri
2008-10-14 . chapter 25
-ROFL- Poor Kantarou. I also feel sorry for 'im...but I'm too busy laughing.

>.< You rock, Haruka!
TambalaiAri
2008-10-14 . chapter 21
-nosebleed-

Hehehe...Nice.
TambalaiAri
2008-10-14 . chapter 12
"Lice."

"Lice yokai?"

"Just lice."

-lol- Another great chapter. ^-^
TambalaiAri
2008-10-14 . chapter 2
That was totally WICKED! XD Kantarou's such a cheater, but that's probably what he what have really done. Go Haruka!
Meep Forever
2008-09-26 . chapter 7
'“Just get it off, stupid!”

”I’m not the stupid one here, stupid! Getting your finger stuck in a bottle again, and for what? A ball that’s not supposed to come out?!”

“It’s shiny.”'

Woo! Shiny!!XD Good!
Aki Marii
2008-09-07 . chapter 10
Ok, decided to review on my favorite chapter...chapter 10, Insanity, it's adorable.

CR
awkward.spider
2008-08-20 . chapter 2
haha, I lost it when he said
"He kicked the little bastard in the shin and made a beeline for the tree."


that was quite the funny
Inuyashanaruto
2008-08-15 . chapter 25
Please write a story about Tactic's you've done an excellent job on the short stories I would love to read something longer!
Inuyashanaruto
2008-08-13 . chapter 15
Very very good!!
Inuyashanaruto
2008-08-12 . chapter 10
:)
dor
2008-08-11 . chapter 2
He kicked the little bastard in the shin and made a beeline for the tree.

hahahaha, ouch
Inuyashanaruto
2008-08-11 . chapter 5
I love it can't wait for more!
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