 wolfen princess14 2009-08-23 . chapter 25Very nice, you write amazingly (though I know that's probably very bad grammer.) I love how you started simply, got the point quickly, and ended just as simply but still getting the point through. A lot of the stories had me saying 'I never thought of that' even though I did laugh aloud at some.
I would love to read an multi-chapter story by you, as you have a wonderful style and keep everyone in character. The only thing I'm bummed about is that I can't comment on every one-shot but that's because I'm lazy and don't feel like writing twenty-five reviews. Oh well, that's on me...Keep writing, and good luck with those 10 themes!
~Wolfen Princess14 |
 TambalaiAri 2008-10-14 . chapter 25-ROFL- Poor Kantarou. I also feel sorry for 'im...but I'm too busy laughing.
>.< You rock, Haruka! |
 TambalaiAri 2008-10-14 . chapter 21-nosebleed-
Hehehe...Nice. |
 TambalaiAri 2008-10-14 . chapter 12"Lice."
"Lice yokai?"
"Just lice."
-lol- Another great chapter. ^-^ |
 TambalaiAri 2008-10-14 . chapter 2That was totally WICKED! XD Kantarou's such a cheater, but that's probably what he what have really done. Go Haruka! |
 Meep Forever 2008-09-26 . chapter 7'“Just get it off, stupid!”
”I’m not the stupid one here, stupid! Getting your finger stuck in a bottle again, and for what? A ball that’s not supposed to come out?!”
“It’s shiny.”'
Woo! Shiny!!XD Good! |
 Aki Marii 2008-09-07 . chapter 10Ok, decided to review on my favorite chapter...chapter 10, Insanity, it's adorable.
CR |
 awkward.spider 2008-08-20 . chapter 2haha, I lost it when he said
"He kicked the little bastard in the shin and made a beeline for the tree."
that was quite the funny |
 Inuyashanaruto 2008-08-15 . chapter 25Please write a story about Tactic's you've done an excellent job on the short stories I would love to read something longer! |
 Inuyashanaruto 2008-08-13 . chapter 15Very very good!! |
 Inuyashanaruto 2008-08-12 . chapter 10:) |
 dor 2008-08-11 . chapter 2 He kicked the little bastard in the shin and made a beeline for the tree.
hahahaha, ouch |
 Inuyashanaruto 2008-08-11 . chapter 5I love it can't wait for more! |