nice story! but i guess it's not over yet. I'll go the sequel!

I hope the plan works...

The boy dragons(except Spyro) are jerks making the girls doing work. I hope Spyro... I'll read and see

Flame shouldn't yelled or blame on Ami like that. At lease Rikki safe...

I wonder why Flames doesn't like fairies? I just read the rest and see

Well that was a surprise. And I thought that Cosmos died when the temple was destroyed. Oh well, at least they don't have to be afraid anymore. Or should they? Very neatly written and nicely done.

The conversations between Daisy and Flame are always my favorites! Keep up the good work!

That was too close for comfort. Daisy just escaped by inches. And my heart was pounding fast with the exhilaration. Great job.

Yay! Everyone's listening to Spyro now. Hopefully Daisy's plan will work.

nice chap, I think I know what happens with mr deathhound!

Now they have an escape plan? What next? Well as far as the plan goes, I hope it works.

The fight was well written. I laughed at the line, "You're not a fire dragon, you're a bully dragon."

I really like Flame's somewhat arrogant personality! I hope Spyro wins the fight!

I liked the fight with the Death Hound. I also think Flame's personality is much different than other stories with him, in a good way (referring mostly to part 3)!

I'm reviewing out of order! ^^
This was a good chapter although Flame came off as a bit of a jerk to me.