This chapter is absolutely lovely.

THAT WAS AWESOME! :D

One problem though,...you rushed too quickly into the KouxYaone. You needed to build up to the KouxYaone, but that's okay. Just try better next time to expand it out. ^^ *glomps* Thanks for writing the chapter!! I can't wait untill the next!!

Aw...! I bet Lirin would be happy to know about that kind of thing. Lol I wonder what would happen if Doku and Lirin were listening in on them?

awesome!
its always good to have more kou/yaone stories :)
update soon!

Great story! I love kougaiji and Yaone fics, thanks for writing this. Please continue the next chapter!

Awesome story! *jumps around in happiness* Write the next chapter! It's too good to be wasted! Once again, super awesome job! *happy, chibi smile*

I thought it was good. All the characters are still in character. Keep writing.