 StarAngel02 2008-08-25 . chapter 2well thanks for this awesomely nice chapter...keep up the good work!! :D
and please update as soon as you can :) |
 SailorCSH 2008-08-23 . chapter 2 Your story is very engaging ad I can't wait until the next chapter. :'( However, is it too idealistic of me to hope that Sakura will keep her innocence and naivete? |
 Death101- Fox Version 2008-08-22 . chapter 2Wow. That's an interesting bet. Awesome job! Please update soon!
-D101 |
 Death101- Fox Version 2008-08-22 . chapter 1Interesting. Awesome job!
-D101 |
 Breadthless 2008-08-12 . chapter 1I liked it. Very original, at least something *I've* never seen before (and well written to boot)! Strange thinking of the concept of Syaoran with a beer belly, but it happens. |
 inuyashangel 2008-08-11 . chapter 1 Yay she got it right! This is Awesome! |
 StarAngel02 2008-08-11 . chapter 1he! he! he! good start there buddy!!
well thanks for this chapter...please update as soon as you can :) |
 whimsicism 2008-08-11 . chapter 1... syaoran sounds like a dirty old man...
the whole concept is interesting though, so please update soon! |
 ~harmony~ 2008-08-11 . chapter 1 Hmm...I have mixed feelings about this story right now.It's not bad but I still can't get the jist of the whole thing so I'd like to wait and see how the story progresses from here.
Looking forward to the next chapter :)
~harmony~
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