 Templa Otmena 2008-10-04 . chapter 1That was gorgeous. Lovely characterisations and angst! :D
Thank you for sharing! |
 macaday me a nut 2008-09-20 . chapter 1I loved that last line. What a prize indeed!
Macaday me a nut (and you're one too!) |
 Little Plum 2008-08-12 . chapter 1Fantastic :) I can picture it - and I especially love the human Doctor! |
 lisa 2008-08-11 . chapter 1 This was really, really beautiful. A couple of punctuation mistakes, and you used loosing instead of losing, but those were minor compared to the lovely characterisation and the perfect capture of their feelings. Rose wanting to prove to herself that he wasn't the same only to come to realise that he is indeed? Just perfect. |
 laurajslr 2008-08-11 . chapter 1 This was a beautiful one-shot. Very real, and very porgnant. There were so many lines in it that I loved. This one: "That after all of her work, all the risks she’d taken, she was still left on their beach, without him." This was great; just summed up how desperate she might have felt. And their conversation at the end was perfect! great job! |
 ShakNali 2008-08-11 . chapter 1Nicely done! I think you did a good job of capturing how both of them might be feeling, without getting all soap-opera-ish about it. |
 Clio83 2008-08-11 . chapter 1What a brilliant oneshot!! I really really liked this, the characterisation felt so real and natural and Rose's final acceptance of the human Doctor made perfect sense by the end. |
 ashleezak 2008-08-11 . chapter 1Very sweet little insight. I like it. Well-written and entertaining. |