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Reviews for: Of Heartbeats and Rooftops
Templa Otmena
2008-10-04 . chapter 1
That was gorgeous. Lovely characterisations and angst! :D

Thank you for sharing!
macaday me a nut
2008-09-20 . chapter 1
I loved that last line. What a prize indeed!
Macaday me a nut (and you're one too!)
Little Plum
2008-08-12 . chapter 1
Fantastic :) I can picture it - and I especially love the human Doctor!
lisa
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
This was really, really beautiful. A couple of punctuation mistakes, and you used loosing instead of losing, but those were minor compared to the lovely characterisation and the perfect capture of their feelings. Rose wanting to prove to herself that he wasn't the same only to come to realise that he is indeed? Just perfect.
laurajslr
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
This was a beautiful one-shot. Very real, and very porgnant. There were so many lines in it that I loved. This one: "That after all of her work, all the risks she’d taken, she was still left on their beach, without him." This was great; just summed up how desperate she might have felt. And their conversation at the end was perfect! great job!
ShakNali
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
Nicely done! I think you did a good job of capturing how both of them might be feeling, without getting all soap-opera-ish about it.
Clio83
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
What a brilliant oneshot!! I really really liked this, the characterisation felt so real and natural and Rose's final acceptance of the human Doctor made perfect sense by the end.
ashleezak
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
Very sweet little insight. I like it. Well-written and entertaining.
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