next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter, next chapter! Like NOW! You took so long updating and now I have to wait longer! Frouny face - :(

DUN-DUN-DUN! WHOOP! WHOOP! They finally kissed! YES! BUT! Keira and Bianca got captured by Luke... That's bad mojo, dude. Zoe's an idiot for making them split up. Gods! What is she? A moron! Yes!

Well, the beginning wasn't boring. I promise. I Loved the WestxKeira fluff! It was fluffy *giggles* Well, update soon, okay? Cool.

LittleBluePistol

YES! SHE KISSED WEST!

DIE LUKE DIE!

UPDATE SOON!

it wasn't that rambley it was good actually great job, I dont think iw ould stop reaidng if I knew what was going to happen i love to re-read:)

cheers

live well smile lots and update often

wow just so you know i was so not expecting that! its a nice twist but she barely knows him so I relaly dont see how they could have built such a relationship they have barely talked really ti was kinda short I LIKE THE TWIST THOUgH I WANT TO SEE(oops capslock to lazy to retype sorry) what you do with it...Im pretty sure i know what going to happen but update soon great job

lmao ya suspense is really fun to write but horrible to read

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and i told my friend about your story (dont u love me?)

she sed she liked it im not sure if she reviewed it or not tho

OMG, OMG, OMG, OMG! Finialy, some romance! I LOVE you! I like your story; update soon! :)

oh keiras in love!

ew you want to kiss luke? EVIL!

update soon!

OH! Very good! D WHO-HO! Keira and West sitting in a tree K-I-S-S-I-N-G! Sorry, that was very childish of me, wasn't it? pouts At least she knows that she's falling for him, though. Are you still going to have the pink queen talk to her? You should, it would be funny. snickers giggles insanely HEHEHEHEHE! XD Update soon. PLEASE!

LittleBluePistol

lol good im glad ur dentist didnt strangle you cuz if he did then this story would be over D

and OMG suspensful ending to the chapter!

i hate suspense (

plz hurry and update soon

OMJ! HE CANT FLY!

so did you get my email for the second chapter in the crossover? yea i know it toke forever...

lolz update son!

byebye

HA-HA! Crazy bannanas and eternal death! That's funny! OOH-OOH-OH! What's in the shiny blue jewelry box? I can't wait to find out! I liked how you made it so that West couldn't really fly a plane. HILARIOUS! You're making another story after this one? YAE! :) happy dance- happy dance! I'm glad it's going to be about West! I like him! He's funny! Wow... a funny son of Hades... talk about an oximoron...

Nico: Hey! Who're you callin' a moron?

LBP: OH! Not you, Nic!

Nico: rolls eyes and snorts

Anywho, I LIKE my dentist! He's really, really, super, uber nice. He didn't tell me when he gave me a shot. I figured it out when I started getting numb.

It was the Andontist who I didn't like. She was all, "Oh, I'm gonna give you a shot now. Okay?"

And I was like, "EEP! Um... O...kay?"

Why tell a kid you're giving her a shot, right?

Anywho, I'm digressing again. GREAT update. So,

UPDATE SOON! Okey-dokey? Cool.

LittleBluePistol

P.S. I'll always read and like your fics, no matter what happens between West and Keira! :)

P.P.S. Why does Zoe have a big mouth? I didn't quite get that part of the title.

P.P.P.S. snicker Another one! Well, TOODLES! XD

great chapter I was reading and I think I get it now but yah good job update soon! lots of smiles:)

hahaha when did you get braces? alot of people in my grade got them this year! my brother even has them!

so nice chappy... OMJ! SHE LET HIM CALL HER CLAIRE! OMJ! lol

anyway... UPDATE SOON!

oh does bianca know about west?

well.. good chappy... and you already updated so i is gonna read the next chapter... bye! :)