Ohh how Kawaii I loved it! So cutte :D

Oh...my...god...(*is reduced to a wildly sobbing mass, bawling and punching into her pillow X'3)

I think every sentence here, EVERY SENTENCE just made me wanna sob, smile, erupt into a plot-bunny rampage, and blow obnoxiously into this army of tissues by my table at the same time...and I'm not even going to go into how perfectly you've managed to capture all of Zero's moments with Yuuki, and like...how in-character you've kept it all. This is EXACTLY how I see him around her...and you've managed to put into writing so beautifully something I myself haven't quite been able to capture lol!! ^_^

I am SO relieved I found something as finely written as this...especially in a fandom clogged with badly-written/plotless ZeKi which just ruins it all...

Great job. GREAT JOB..(*bows and favourites a million times over XD)

epic win! i lurve Zeuuki, so cute. you did a really good job!^^

I think it was great! I really enjoyed it! XD

Giggles,
Author-sama

hey! lol i thought it was good!
especially the stuff in brackets at the beginning-middlish, cos those words were really impact-ish and well written ^^

hm, if anything, work on linking the difference scenes, so it flows better? or distingushing better each scene or so...

lol cos the x looks good yeah, but it doesnt really help, especially when you put the x although the next part is still part of the scene before? you know what i mean?
but yeah! still a good read, dw ^^

epic success :).
as usual, lol. great writing.

That was really cute! I love how it's all from Zero's perspective!

Epic fail? Oh far from it! This is one of the better VK fan fictions I've read. You did a wonderful job at catching those internal emotions and conveying them in an eloquent manner. :)

kind of like it?!
it was AMAZING!
really good!! XD

keep writing more! tc... ^ ^

Aw, I liked it! Great job! : )

TT__TT

WHY CAN'T EITHER OF MY ZEKI'S (AT LEAST ONE, IF NOT BOTH) BE AS SWEET AND PWETTY AS YOURS IS?

Even with the changing of the POV's.

D<

It's not bad at all! Very bittersweet and sad and OH GOD, WHY DOES YUUKI HAVE TO BE AN IDIOT AND CHASE KANAME WHEN HE IS JUST USING HER FRIENDS?
...HER FRIEND THAT COULD BE SOMETHING MORE?
D<

(I really didn't mind Kaname before, but the second he said, "She'll come back to me"...D<
That. Meant. War.)

You really tied everything together...

AND ARE MAKING ME BABBLE.

You really showed Zero's feelings...

THAT YUUKI IS SO BLIND TO. IT IS TOO OBVIOUS AND SHE DOES NOT SEE THAT?
D<

And...yeah...so sad. Why does he have to keep thinking he is a monster? D:

(And if the mangaka does not do something, he is going to die. DIE SOON. D:)

...but, yeah, you really connected it together very nicely...and you showed his feelings and yuuki's obliviousness and Kaname's stealingness...

♥

Epic fail? Are you freakin KIDDING! That was freakin AMAZING! How can you not see that? I love how it's written, as though it's talking to you. You have an awesome writing style. This is one of the best stories I have found for this pairing, or really anywhere. They just don't get much better than this. Take some pride in your work, because this is work to be proud of!

This was great!
I love Zero/Yuuki pairing!

aw that was so nice..zero yuki forever~!

Good job! You deserve Yuuki, Zero, go for it!! *sighs* True love :)