To give up on dreams, for the sake of loved ones...

First, I conclude that you are likely a parent yourself; it takes intimate experience to write such an accurate description of what a real child's first birthday is like!

Second, I conclude that this story has not yet been concluded... But it absolutely should be! How could anyone walk away from such a cliff-hanger?

What will happen to Delilah, and what part if any will Demona, Fang and Matt Bluestone play in what comes next?

You said in your introduction, "In short, there's one more part coming but I'm not saying when." It might have been nearly four years since you wrote that, but...Please, finish this story!

Still waiting patiently and hoping that you'll finish this someday... :)

Please, PLEASE finish this story! I just gotta know what happens next!

Please, PLEASE finish this story! I just gotta know what happens next!

WOW! That was interesting. I WANT TO KNOW WHAT HAPPENED TO DELILA! _

0.0 This was sooo long. It was incredibly (SP?) good but really hard to read because it was so long. Perhaps, split it in to chapters? I think I'd be easier that way. Anyway, write again. This was good.