Awh! How heartbreaking - I mean it's truthful and brilliant and gourgeous, but heartbreaking too. So wonderfully well written, I love it.

that is always what everyone says perfect but for who really not being able to have a choice and not being happy not perfect loved the story
maria

Snif. Sad, but true.

It's true. And an intresting insight into the Doctor's mind. As a non-Doctor shipper, I think it goes deeper than just wanting to give her a happy ending, but it was a nice glance into a Ten/Rose mind.

LD. x

that was absolutely brilliant, the ending was so powerful i loved this :)

OMG, that was heartbreaking and beautiful on so many levels. You took a simple point and made it beautiful with simple language and frank emotion. It's short, but length would have robbed this of it's amazing simplicity, You have perfectly summed up his thoughts, and I am so glad that you wrote this.

Bloody brilliant!

Oi! That made me teary eyed. Lovely story letting us peak into the Doctor's mind and heart. Great job!

Oh...amazing! Journey's End was bittersweet on SO many levels, and this just pulled that right out and ran w/ it and wow...wonderful! Poor Doctor. *sniffle* It really sort of echoes the whole "Doctor's soul" from the show, and I can't possibly tell you how much I love it! Thanks for posting!

Oh, thank you. Someone who took canon and made it work without Rose becoming a whiney child. Thank you ever so much!

SNIFFLE!!
this ending was bittersweet. I'm glad that the Doctor and rose end up together though, even though it's not exactly HIM!!

You did a good job, I really liked it!