I thought it was amazingly awesome. You are a really talented writer. (I thought the ending was 'aw' worthy.)

Aw!

I can't believe it ended...

Nice ending tough

really cool! great Heroine, by the way. She's commanding, Nobel, but also understanding and caring.

I DON'T HAVE MUCH TO SAY.

BUT I WILL SAY YOU'RE DOING A WONDERFUL JOB!

PLEASE UP DATE SOON!

please add the new chapter soon!

Awesome chapter...

Oh, and did u know that that movie was made in Puerto Rico?

I know, because I live in P.R. and saw him a couple of times during shooting...AND HE'S SO HOT!

Lol

Anyways update soon please...

OH.

MY.

GOD.

THAT.

WAS.

SO TOTALY AWSOME!

PLEASE UP DATE SOON!

I AM SO DEPRESSED NOW. You're a really good writer.

Huh! I can't believe Sasuke would hit his child?

Anyways, update soon, please

interesting i cant wait to see what happens next lol keep
up the great work :)

it looks interesting.

I love the song awesome chappy

Uh...weird, but I'd like to see where this is going.

that was cool i saw some bonding going on and SPERM DONAR!LOL hahahaha!

aweseome