What a great tag!
Loved this - there was no wrap up time in the ep and they carried on as if nothing had happened in the next one...
Thanks :)

A great McKay & Sheppard friendship story. I really enjoyed reading it. Well written!

Great story. I loved the interaction between the two characters.

Mic (the wife)

“You think….you think…..shit, McKay, you think I’m mad at you?”

Rodney rolled his eyes. “Hello, genius here, and it doesn’t exactly take a genius to figure out why.”

“Well, in this case the genius should return his MENSA card.”


Very nice!!

That was really good. Enjoyed every moment of your chapter.

Nice story. I like how you handle the two different sides of the story here and are honest to both characters. This is early on and you handle that well, showing the initial surprise at what they would have to face. Well done.

Nice, when does the training start? I liked the way you let it be assumed that Sheppard was still in Super-Sheppard mode. That made me shake along with Rodney; just waiting for the other shoe to fall. Great tension. Thanks for sharing.

Interesting story. I enjoyed the concern Sheppard had for Rodney. Thanks for sharing

Wow, I really liked that! I think you got into Rodney's head very well!! These two have become good friends and I can see something like this happening behind the scenes we get to see.

Beautifully written! You did a wonderful job on it, as you always do.

Nicely done but it feels out of character for both. I don't see Sheppard ever breaking under torture or McKay volunteering for the pain and humiliation of a SERE course, which are supposed to be horrific and quite scarring. Also McKay bandaged his own arm in the episode and then the returning medical staff fixed it. I really like your writing style. It's very subtle.