THis is one of my favorite labryiinth ditties.

OOPS.

Well Sarah, what now?

Aww, this was a nice story.

However, I didn't really like the ending. You didn't tie things up. I wanted to know what her plans were going to be. Can you at least make a sequel? *hopeful grin*

Who. Sexy chapter.

Aww, this story is nearly finished. I am a bit sad.

"Already, her mind was wandering to the issue of his pants. Did they have a fly or something… how in world was she supposed to get them off of him?"

Great quote. :D

Oh.

*next chapter*

Oh, this was a great chapter! :O That moan at the end! Uh-oh...Sarah just ruined her chances...

Oh, steamy kissing scene. Love it!

Aw, poor Jareth! He just wants a lil' hanky panky!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE this story. I will add it to my favourites. :)

*moseys on over to chapter five*

Aww, a fairly short chapter. :(

*moves on*

Still likin' it. :D *gives cookie to author*

Wow. This was a very different start to a story; I really like it! And to have Jareth walk in on them? Urgh, embarrassing. But on the bright side; Jareth! HOT! Yumminess!

I will move on to Chapter Two, then. :) But I am certainly liking this story so far!

Epic fanfic. really. i loved your style and the way you put things; oh, and thanks for being kind to Michael. Usually the boyfriends are jerks, so it was nice to see a nice boyfriend. It spiced things up a bit. it COULD be longer, but i like (a lot) how you ended it. keep up the great writing!

i just noticed that it's been a while since this was posted... ah well, who cares?

ooh, i cant wait to see what Jareth's up to. XD tally-ho

*evil cackling* ooh, Jareth mustnt be so happy... heheheh... So far so good! on to the next chapter!