I love it! can't wait to read more.

O.O Wowz... I NEVER read 'in-progress' stories, let alone review for one. Seriously, this was something special that I felt the need to comment on.

-.- Don't feel special, it's a quirk of mine... xD

I love your portrayle of both Naruto and Neji in this story, they are kept so well in character [even if you don't see much of Neji at times]. I tend to lean more towards the personality traits given to the characters in the manga, rather than the anime as well [the conversion usually skrews things up a bit].

And about the whole feminine/masculine ordeal, I apparently have an opinion about that [shocked]. When it comes to plotless smut [ie one-shots] I tend to have a preference on who would be 'seme' or 'uke'. But in long chapter stories, it depends on the mood of the story or whatever characteristics the author happens to give the characters [if they are OOC that is, but i find it best if the characters are as in character as possible, even though I myself tend to stray from that theory o_O;]. Characters with strong egos or whatever, in my eyes would be hard to convey as 'uke' [Naruto for example] unless paired with someone with a much larger form of stubborness and pride.

But that's just me. ^ ^

I'll have to admit I was a little wary in the begining, SasuNaru isn't something I get too excited about...

But other than that it was a really awesome read, b^-^d can't wait for the next update.

p.s. Hideki is one ofmy favorite names O.o just thought i'd throw that out there.

p.p.s. ._. Gomen for the spelling mistakes, it's 2 am and i'm not all that attentive right now...

I truly enjoy this story!

omg this is totally awesome ! hehe i cant wait for the next chapter hehehe ^_^ keep up the awesome work !

Nice chapter. I really like it. I don't have that whole thing either, it's just that in a lot of stories, there's an uke and a seme. But I love the stories where there isn't. Oh, and, you kind of mentioned that you thought of them as humans, and I want you to know that I do to. Don't misunderstand me, please. I've lived with homosexuals all my life, so it's impossible for me to think otherwise. I'm actually leading a group right now that goes against homophobia. Just wanted to make that clear. Update soon!

i love love LOVE! Okay... so i cant type that well, my arm's in a sling, so no long review. but thanks 4 the chapter.

We! Loves it!

Awkward turtle. >> Man, how do you go back and eat dinner with someone you just pinned to the ground and molested. ♥ Cheers, mate.

Good chapter, I enjoyed it. Though, one thing? You over-gayed Hideki a little bit for me. Like, first he was this smarmy sex godlet, and then he was actually pretty normal. I'd suggest toning down the ghey next time he comes 'round. Oh, and "erect, pert nipples" stoned me for a second there. xD; I'm not quite sure what effect you were going for, but that line is a little... deer-in-headlights reminiscent. Avoid avoid avoid?

Anywho, looking forward to... smut? :O See you next update. --Judo

I love this story. But who's the seme (for the most part)? In seme, I mean the masculine one in the couple. Not the whole top scenario. Keep it up!

Well... I just wanted to leave an encouraging review. Feeling encouraged yet? But Im liking the story so far. Its nicely worked and I like Neji's chacater in this. I'll be waiting for your next chapters!

Why, you're welcome. xD I definitely get what you're saying with Neji not being a stoic bastard. He is a bit of an **, but he definitely has a lot of pent-up emotion in there. Of course, Neji has high amounts of control, so even though he may be in mental chaos, he has the ability to restrain himself from acting on it.

Hah. You have him pretty good, though. Neji is one of my favourite characters and I'm practically a nazi when it comes to writing him correctly, but you definitely have a better grasp on him than some, who just love making him all Chibichibi uke Neji-chan.

On that note, I want to make a brief comment about Naruto's ** habits. I know he has super sperm and all, but even the splurters don't have that much of a range. -ahem- Unless he was doubled over, I really don't think the semen would hit his face. xD Props on not saying "**" or "come," though. I hate that term like burning.

Anywho, waiting for next chapter. I hope your schooling goes well. --Judo

I'm really enjoying it so far, the plot seems interesting and characterization is good. Grammar and whatnot is well, too, and I haven't noticed any typos at all worth mentioning. My only problem is that you made Neji just a little bit girly and a touch too easily-shaken. In general he's much more rigid than that, and even though he sent Naruto a-tumbling, I don't really think he'd allow it to affect him that much--and if he did, he wouldn't show it. Besides, Naruto's tough. I doubt something like that could have offed him.

Either way, I lie in wait for the next chapter, vair interested on seeing what you have in store for these two unfortunate pawns. Until then. --Judo

naruto is crazy but i love him. update soon PLEASE

Tsunade is evil

That is all XD

Update soon

update this is getting REALLY INTERESTING!