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Neon Genesis
2009-08-04 . chapter 1
Oh my. -stares-

This was gorgeous. Flowing and poetic and descriptive and -

Gorgeous.

Your diction is simply superb. Your word order, your choice of grammar, your style...entirely fantastic. I absolutely love how you described the - junkyard, was it? At any rate. It made it beautiful.

All of Sasuke's observations on Sakura made me smile. :)

So, yes. Lovelylovelylovely. Well done, indeed. ^^
intoxobscurity
2008-08-13 . chapter 1
Beautifully realistic ♥
Starinthenight
2008-08-12 . chapter 1
Aw, this was a delight to read. Simplistic, yet very invocative of the imagination.

All in all, I found it really cute. ^_^ I'm a sucker for SasuSaku lol thank you for writing this!
MolotovMyLove
2008-08-11 . chapter 1
Whoa... that was beautiful. Um... is this a one shot? I hope it's a story/ Please update soon. I'm gonna go check out your stories now... *still in awe*
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