 Neon Genesis 2009-08-04 . chapter 1Oh my. -stares-
This was gorgeous. Flowing and poetic and descriptive and -
Gorgeous.
Your diction is simply superb. Your word order, your choice of grammar, your style...entirely fantastic. I absolutely love how you described the - junkyard, was it? At any rate. It made it beautiful.
All of Sasuke's observations on Sakura made me smile. :)
So, yes. Lovelylovelylovely. Well done, indeed. ^^ |