wow an amazing story i absolutely worship you and your humour.
v. v. v. v. good. good? good is suck a sucky word, awesome, great, fantastic are better methinks.
thanks for the read!!
lurve coco

Isn't Bella's daughter named after the Loch Ness Monster?!?

More Please More! Do you know any good Nessie/Jacob Stories that are similar to yours?

i love jake / nessie pairings... but this. is. HILARIOUS
poor jake... hhahahahaha!

WOW!

oh my god that was fantastic!

This has got to be one of the most embarrasing moments in the would be future. Hahaha, was very good, I couldn't hold my laughs. I loved when Nessie tried to shut him up, but Jacob took the chat almost resigned (at first, at least). I cannot begin to think what was Edward thinking previous to taking the decision to talk to them about sex... Hahahaha...
Alice must be ROFL. I would be... xD

omg! lol that was so good its not even funny, of course nothing like twilight or nothing that stephenie would write but it was really funny lol but um i didnt like the 3rd person perspective and somethimes i didnt know who was talking but other than that it was fricken awesome! lmao I LOVED IT!

I really liked this, and I don't usually like stories about Nessie/Jacob...this was great!

I usually hate any jacob/nessie pairing, because I couldn't stand Breaking Dawn, but this story was fantastic!! I loved it. Great writing and the second chapter was just hilarious!

There were several things I loved about these stories: The comedy. Oh the comedy was wonderful. Especially in the second one (love the ending, btw, XD).

The evilness that is Nessie, because that was just /mean/ in all the most hilarious ways and you can't help just just love the girl.

And third (and this is going to sound a little strange), the fact that you wrote both fics in third person POV. I could tolerate it in the books, but I'm really not a fan of the style. I've been craving third person Twilight ficlets for weeks, and you have fulfilled that. Thank you very much! :)

Very good. Cute and passionate and hilarious all at once. My review would be longer and better defined, but typing with an iPod Touch keyboard is rather diffiicult. But I really enjoyed reading your take on the JacobXNessie relationship, and I hope you will continue.

Just came across this fic, and the scene with Edward, Ness and Jake is hilariously funny!! Great job!

Great story! Love it!

Haha, this is great. I've always thought it was a little disturbing that Edward would be able to read his own daughter's thoughts, and I know there are a few stories out there that are about Edward dealing with Nessie and Jacob's relationship, but I think this is the best I've read so far.

For some reason, one of my favorite moments was the mention of all the different couples being flirty and horny during the movie, with the exception of Charlie, Carlisle, and Esme. I totally pictured the three of them sitting there and eating popcorn out of a bucket, either totally oblivious or rolling their eyes, ignoring it all.

You have a good writing style. Everything flowed very nicely and nothing distracted from the actual story. Very nicely done!