OMGLOL!
I'm so glad I knew what was happened there, or I may have had to kill something...small...like a carrot...*watches too many cartoons*
Anyway, I liked it! I always like hearing things from Monica's perspective because she's (pardon the expression) weird, and that always makes people's psychology interesting.
-MEG

I'm overly excited!! A new DRR fic by Cyclone2!!
In spite of being different from the majority of your fics, this was excellent, the license in the timeline did fit naturally even though before-hand I wasn't convinced it would.
I deeply hope this isn't the last DRR fic you write and share with us, we really need you.

I'll be waiting for more!

You're back!
I love the 'behind the scenes' glance at the two characters which seemed to flow so naturally. Even though the story was interwoven with the John Doe timeline, so the reader knew how things were going to end up, you managed to build the tension really well. Hope to see more stories from you!

Awesome fic! Write more soon. :)

I haven't really been involved in XF fics but your work has me thinking that maybe I've totally missed out on a lot of quality writing. This fic is beautiful and even though it's not M&S it's still just as wonderful.

Lovely work and I look forward to more from you soon. :)

I've always loved your writing and this is no exception. Even though I never really got into the whole John/Monica pairing this piece has made me want to go back and re-watch seasons 8 and 9 purely to see them both again.

I totally enjoy how you've left us hanging with no real resolution ... or is there?

*lol* Top work darl! Keep it up! :D

P.S. SPAM!! *lmao*

Great story! I am glad that some people didnt quit writting Monica/John fics:)
I hope we'll read a lot more from you:)
greetsKatja

Great story. Thank You :)

Robin

Wow. Angsty. I ilke the ending - its very different. Poor Monica. :(

Aww! I love this pairing, and they definitely didn't get enough attention.

Love the conversation between them about her moving in; and Monica's determination to find him. Cruel place to leave her though, not knowing ;-)

Yay for you writing!