Nice!

I love how easygoing things are between them at the end; there aren't any awkward feelings that linger, just pure, youthful bliss.

I think the characteristic I loved the most about this story, though, was your detailed descriptions concerning meager details like potions ingredients. I could see the dragon scales, gleaming madly, in the cauldron's firelight. I could smell the ancient herbs lingering in the humid air. I loved it all!

Dang!
This is really hot stuff.

It'd be nice if you conintued this!

It was pretty good. The plot was very believable and the *cough* was awesome.

Wow...just...** wow. I don't normally read Snupin but...damn it that was HOT! I think there might need to be a follow-up chapter to this!!
Seriously, I thought you got both personalities down very well and (although the Sirius-bashing hurt a little bit) I really enjoyed this. Definitely a new favourite!!

OhmiGOD!You are succh a good writer!Iloved this story,seriuosly!

yay. go with the sevvie/remmy. OH! What if siri was right, and rem ended up being the spy?! lolz! i have to do something with that now!!

thou hast inspired me. i am most greatful.
lolz

I love it! Thanks for writing it. :)

Wow! This has to be one of the best Remus/Severus fics I've read. Your take on the two characters is really refreshing and realistic, as are the Potions details. *goes to read other fics by author* :)

OMG! That was great! This is the best story of this pairing I've read in quite a while! I absolutely love it!

I've just finished reading your story & felt it would have been terribly fair NOT to review since what you did was totally EVIL! I mean how could you leave me in this tension! I NEED to know what happens next!

seriously now, here's what I think:
OUTSTANDING! You've absolutely impressed me! I feel like a simple "more please! asap!" will not suffice to outline the magnitude of this story, therefore I believe a more proper review is in order:
PLOT: very, very original... & very good also.
ACTION: what can I say I got so caught up last night that my folks had to force me to bed(it was past midnight!)
EMOTION:I refrain from making any comments on this regard of your story for some very SERIOUS reasons:
1)I can't see anymore!
2) my chest hurts!
3) my tension has reached a dangerous point!
[look in what state have you just brought me! lol!]
CHARACTERS: I love them! especially Severus who is beautifully well-written! no need to worry about ooc, this IS a fanfiction after all! lol.
UPDATES: this is not fair! no ! definitely not! why did this chappie have to come to an end so quickly? why?

PLUS: you've managed to surprise me so...
all in all, a brilliant idea embodied in a marvelous, well-written story!

well, I suppose you got the main idea: VERY WELL DONE! write sequel SOON!

SINCERELY,
~moon~

That was HOT! Very yummy.

omg that was the hottest, most sexy, amazing..est, sweatiest, orgasmic..est, hottest .. which ive already sed.. SEX ever. i wa sliek reading adn reading.. i too felt like i had lights explode frmo my very eyes.
oh god.. you make me want to turn into a man. and make myself gay. lmao. sorry if i scared u there.
i love snupin to bits... u have noo idea.
thats going in my favs.

You have made me fall in love with Remus and Severus through your fics. They have so much in common and are, as demonstrated so erotically in this story, as hot as ** hell together.
It amazes me how you can make all that potions stuff (ingredients and such) sound interesting. I'm worse than Remus at trying to recall that kind of thing for fics.
It was fantastic as your stories always are and I'm hoping to read many, many more slashy one shots from you. :-)