GASP! a sequel! it is too good to be true and yet it is! alright! i want zack's story to!

and now the couple face off their opponent...namine and the school population!

p.s. i still don't like having namine as the villian! she is too quiet and kind in the game! not to mention she is totally innocent! but the author can do whatever she wants...sigh...

p.p.s. CAN'T WAIT FOR TIFA AND ZACK'S STORY!

woh!

i am so glad for the ending! I LUVE CORN ALSO! hehehehe...an this fluffy romantic story is over and for once i am happy it ended( or should i say began...for real this time?) WITH A KISS!


GREAT JOB TO THE AUTHOR!

WOHHO! go zack! thank you for finally making yuffie realize that riku likes her too! uwah! tifa is so right when she said "stop them before they get so sweet our teeth fall out "

hehehe...am giggling like a love sick puppy here!

oh! i just love yuffie was able to foil namine's plan...it made her have no choice but to wear the red bathing suit...

such drama! i can't wait for the next chapters!! i will keep on reading!

p.s. i really hate it that you made namine the evil one! wah! but i guess your awesome story makes up for it!

okay! this is really really funny!

the funniest one i think is this:

“You don’t really want me on your team. I’m terrible.” Yuffie said.

“I know,” Riku said. “I want you on the other guy’s team.”

Yuffie swatted him with her free hand. “That is no way to talk to your girlfriend,” she said, forgetting for a moment that Naminé was right there, intently watching them.

“You’re right,” he said. “My apologies, sugar plum. I’m sorry, honey pie. I’ll never do it again, my little pumpkin. Is that better?”

She wrinkled her nose at him. “I feel so edible all of the sudden.”

“Cute enough to eat,” he said. Yuffie looked down at the table, turning pink again. He didn’t have to overact quite so much. Naminé would catch on if he kept being so ridiculous.

“Adorable,” Tifa said, shaking her head. “I aspire to be that adorable.”

Namine stood up, grabbed Tifa’s arm, and yanked her away. As they hurried off, Yuffie heard Naminé whisper, “Nauseating,” just loudly for Yuffie to hear.

wow! okay i just love the story! yuffie is so adorable with her reactions!
it is so hilarious! i will so keep on reading this fanfic! though i have to say, riku is definetly out of character! namine too and zack! i think it would have been better with sora(as the bida guy) and namine( as the bida girl) and kairi(as the evil girl) and roxas(as the twin of namine)...not so sure but it is my own preference ^_^...but I GIVE TWO THUMBS UP FOR THE PLOT!

I love this story, its absolutely adorable! I was squealing (how fangirlish of me) at the end haha.

lawl. that was great haha. i was laughing so hard, i dunno why too xD really good, so far.

i like it i may have to check out the book too.

Aww the whole thing was so sweet! I really liked Yuffie's character but i think you should have put more of Riku's in there.

I finally got time to sit down and finish reading this. School equals hell, but I managed to make time! :D The ending to this was perfect, very satisfying indeed. And I thought the scene was sweet! :D I'm glad both Riku and Yuffie finally got their happy ending together. And yay! A sequel! I can't wait to read that, too! Keep up the good writing ;D

I can see that! :) It sounds promising.

I think that a sequel is unnecessary. I really liked how this ended and it was all cute and stuff! Perhaps a companion fanfiction, which isn't a continuation, but something in the same vein, theme, etc.

This was so cute! It made me smile, giggle and feel all fuzzy inside! :)

That was fantastic!

Nice reminiscent last line. I really want to go read some more now. Sorry for the short review!

I'm not too sure...I think it's under profile settings...

Aw, the cuteness! :) I'm big on the Yuriku, so when it's cute I just smile really big and keep reading.

Zack as you portray him reminds me of a less literal-minded version of my brother. When I'm down, he'll come over and talk to me and stuff like that. But, he considers the answer to all problems is just what it seems. But, perhaps, your Zack is like that too...