 NekoKriszty 2009-10-30 . chapter 1asdface |
 cherryxdarling@yahoo.com 2009-10-20 . chapter 1 THIS IS THE FUNNIEST THING EVER OMG.
(: |
 Juniper11 2009-10-17 . chapter 1Oh, wow.
That was, um. Yeah. I think you captured the essence rather well. |
 bbb136 2009-10-04 . chapter 1i thought the start was funny but tbh u lost me at that point. |
 Celsy 2009-10-03 . chapter 1i cant express my gratitude for you! this was so amusing! btw, my worst one is "the albino" reference, and calling someone "pasty" is not atractive :P i like it whan they call them by their names! *sigh* only in fanfictions...NO style. DO YOU HAVE NO SHAME? imagine calling your friends by their hair colour? it just doesnt capture the person as a whole. my name identifies my soul more than my body shape or eye colour. |
 Xadnama 2009-09-20 . chapter 1:). This made me lol. But if my writing ever gets like that, send me a message, k? Thankies. |
 NeedsHerCaffine 2009-09-16 . chapter 1I LOVE YOU! TWILIGHT IS A STOLEN PIECE OF SHIT (literally, she stole the whole thing from like 6 diffrent authors) AND THIS IS HILARIOUS. i loves you. |
 TragicStoryteller666 2009-09-01 . chapter 1i kept laughing but in the end i was totally fucking confused dude |
 SasukesRevenge7 2009-08-30 . chapter 1Lol this made me smile =D
Totally badass XD |
 Crazy PurpleSage 2009-08-24 . chapter 1Bwaahahahahahahahahaha
(older than 15) *Face-palm*
I love the comment about how vampires are supposed to sparkle. XD XD And the cap locks thing, you should have added a bunch of exclamation points too! lol
Wow. That was just hilarious. Gotta love crack fics. Especially ones that make fun of Twilight and stupid fanfics. Like, OMG! O.O
XD |
 thecrazyfatguy 2009-08-24 . chapter 1you are my new, new god! XD |
 Marua 2009-08-23 . chapter 1 I hate twilight. You totally just made me love you. This. was. PERFECT! |
 Failing Mentality 2009-08-21 . chapter 1Good god. On a more professional note, the summary is the best. The content, not so much.
This is the reason why I have lost faith in SasuNaru, and you did an exceedingly accurate rendition of it.
And don't get me started on Twilight. *shiver* |
 delziax3 2009-08-15 . chapter 1Hahaha, love it. That's all I have to say. |
 Kioku C. 2009-08-10 . chapter 1Omg you put the fanfiction world and twilight retardedness in to a freaking nut shell! A NUT SHELL I TELL U!-preferably walnuts.
Sasuke: I didn't know what i was saying...
Naruto: I think she's on crack
Kioku: WE'RE ALL ON CRACK HERE NARUTO! THE CRACK OF AN ASS TO BE PERCISE!-that's where most of us writers get our ideas...we just decide to pull them out of our asses one day...
Naruto: so many things are pulled out of asses these days...
Sasuke: not to mention so many things are shoved up asses these days...
Naruto: O_O...
Sasuke:...or rather, the same object is inserted repeatedly...
You'r awsome, keep writting, i love your vocab XD...are u sure yur 13?...oh well...lol have a great experiance...in the fanfiction world...i guess... |