All I can say to the other guest reviewer is - you've NEVER been in the military and know nothing about the rules.

Interesting story but the whole concept that the military has rules against single parents is a little odd. You can't have a child with your commanding officer - fraternization rules apply - but a female officer showing up pregnant isn't against regs. And it wouldn't be anyone's business as to who the father was, in and of itself.

Very intriguing plot/story line. So Oma "interfers" more than we thought! LOVE IT!

PAGE MARK - LATER SEASONS.

Thanks though and Cheers Jen

I always thought it was strange how they talked about Jacks special genetic make up but the man never had children. So it was all a dream but not a dream. In fact you mention the dream happenng in the story. Well crafted but one thing when Daniel was grabbed in the hallway that was where you should have introduced his girl friend not two or three chapter later. It left me wondering if there was another story that I missed.

Good job and I'll be back later.

Kelli

All I can say is don't ask don't tell.

Well written and you've kept me interested.

Moving on to the next chapter.

Kelli

What! I missed something who grabbed Daniel? I take it SG-1 knows the grabber?

Well off to see who it is.

Kelli

You have me intriqued. There's so much I should be doing but I need to know what happens.

On to chapter 2.

Kelli

:eek: I didn't see that one coming. A dream? WOW, so didn't see that one ;)

AMAZING AMAZING AMAZING

I really loves your story.I thought it was well thought story line was absolutely only thing that I didn't like was that it was only a dream.I thought it should have been reality because they really deserve than that I really liked your story.

Aaw, it was only a dream? That is so sad. We can only hope Jack learns from this dream and takes steps. Seriously though, this was a great story. It was very well written and I really enjoyed it. I kept on thinking, "I would love to read the story behind that part." For instance, the alternate reality that Daniel and Jacob went to. Again, good job.

Wow, great story! Jack and Sam are like my heros for life _ What a twist at the end though.. pore Jack to have to wake up and find it was all a dream.. haha _ but that made for an awesome end of an awesome story! nice work! job well done )

JaCk BuTt

Great story! I love the part with Hammond and Jacob talking that is something you don't see a lot in a Jack and Sam story.

Wonderful story, I enjoyed it a lot. And way to update! :)