I can't believe it's over. D: I think you should write me a Stan and Kyle story. ;D Just a one-shot. But, knowing you, you probably have more important things to do. xD Well, yeah. This was amazing while it lasted! (:

Okay here is my final review.

I disliked it. To be honest I expected something more concrete from it. You have useless sentences, dialogue that could have been less...repitive. Your characters were very two dimensional and not surprising. You also have plot holes, many many plot holes.

Okay for useless sentenes. Take a break from this for a month then re read your WHOLE story. If you find yourself skipping lines, then you have crap that you can take out. Take it out. Just delete it. Sometimes being simple and to the point make a good story.

Dialogue has purposes: character development, plot development. Thats it. Was it necessary to include little parts that explained Craig's favourite T.V show? Probably not.

Your characters seemed so repetive. They all seemed head over heels over each other. Not being homophobic (im gay) but try doing StanxWendy or even KennyxBebe. Or someone else. A girl in the fanfictions would be nice one in awhile that way we have a real girl to understand her emoitional side..not just a emo Stan. Also your characters didnt learn anything. Ask yourself this: did you characters change or learn anything at the end of the book? Did people start believing in CartmanxButters? Did Clyde talk about his problem to Tolkien? Did Christophe ever accomplsh a mission?

Plot holes include: Butters ever got to see NY? Christophe with his mission (thats what sucked me in). Heaven and Hell what are they like? Did the hell group ever run from the smoke people? Like include SOME ACTION!


Well thats it. The only reason I'm so harsh is because it has so much potential. SO MUCH. Just on the next one keep in mind your characters should not be introduced so quickly. Take a few chapters and slowly introduce everyone. I would personally have included Kenny in the middle when everyone died.

I did like the ending but try a less cliched letter. This is supposed to be from a 18 yeard old teen boy. Not a sensei :P.

Good luck on the rest.

That was amazing.
I pretty much agree with everything that tweekers said...
I really, really, really enjoyed this fic. It was so amazing.
Oh, my god.
Their friendship; all 10 of them with eachother, I mean... even though some of them may all not be that close to eachother, they're still... friends. You know? I really admire that. I wish I had that.
And Kenny... is amazing. So amazing. I love him, so much, in this story. It's so heartbreaking, Kenny having to sacrifice himself for the others' happiness. He's perfect, as I've said before... I love him dearly. I really do.

Oh my god.
Okay, I'll go letter by letter, yeah?
Butters' letter, I love how Kenny calls him kiddo. Seriously, that is just...awesome. And amazing and. And. And. I just really love that. Butters needs to take him up on that advice, really. I almost get an inkling of Kenny/Butters here, but that's just me, I know, rofl.
Token's letter, aw, it really is the perfect lesson of not taking friends/people for granted, eh? Makes me sad. But I do love the mention of how Token needs to be there for Clyde, so true. And the mention of Kenny and Clyde's movie choices, haha, classic.
Cartman's letter, omg, perfect. Cartman has had a pretty ** life, I mean, really, and he puts up that persona that...yeah, might kind of be him, but there's another side of him there, I totally believe that. Oh, Kenny, you're so insightful.
'Tophe's letter... 'Life alone…isn’t really living.' Agh that's just...so true. And I love the analysis of 'Tophe's character there. It's so him. Okay, so he's not in canon much. But I totally see him as this guy that people assume is infallible, but he totally is, and it's kind of his fault that he never shows it. Oh, 'Tophe!
Craig's letter, haha, totally echoed my thoughts there, I wasn't happy Tweek died, but! Am I right? I like how you point out that Craig's group is closer than the main boys. Canon? Perhaps not. But the main boys aren't really a group of friends, when you consider how Cartman factors in and how Kenny isn't even particularly close to the others. So Craig's group could totally be closer...and here...they are. I like that.
Stan's letter, oh that one made me sad. Kenny/Stan friendship is one of my favorite things, because you don't see it often. I think they could actually be really good friends, they're both such...dudes, you know? GET ACCESS TO DREAMS, KENNY, DO IT, DO IT!
Clyde's letter, okay see, you MADE me a fan of Kenny/Clyde friendship, it's just so awesome. And Clyde. Lord that boy just needs so many hugs. I just...hugs.
Tweek's letter, omg. See I love how you have Kenny be so perceptive to them. He knows that Tweek will be blaming himself for this stuff, and so he says something to hopefully alleviate that, which is just so wonderfully Kenny. God.
Kyle's letter...AUGH, Kenny, lord. Kenny in this story, I can just seriously relate to him so much. Not the whole dying thing, sure, but how he feels about Kyle and everything, god I've been through that more times than I care to remember. And then he dies and. Ah. Man. Sometimes I wonder if Kenny really is my favorite character, just considering how obsessed I am with his psychological state due to his deaths and with how he's perceived in fic. I mean, seriously, I could go on...and on...and on...about how much I hate Kenny's fanon characteristics. But I love how he is here. I really do. I feel like this was a Kenny chapter even though it technically wasn't. Kenny is just...really selfless.
Okay, lame comparison here. But how he is in these letters really reminds me of Steve Yzerman, a hockey player. He's really famous and well-known for being a great player, but also for how humble he is. He really cares for everyone else before himself. And that's how Kenny is here. There's no oh woe is me, it's all about helping the rest of them cope with what happened. The only thing he asks for is a grave, and really, that's a lot less than he deserves.
I don't know.
I wish I could think of something really awesome to say in this review, but I can't.
I just loved this fic, from beginning to middle to end. So many twists and turns. The gay! Haha, oh, the gay.
I really enjoyed this fic, and I'm not just saying that because I'm your superbestfriend. Really, trust me on that.
Seriously?
Best birthday present ever~
Love ya, dude.

-tweek

AWW.
KENNY.

the Kyle letter just broke my heart.
I KNEW I COULD SMELL K2 SOMEWHERE.
You're no ninja past me. >:C

LOL.
This was great.
Well done, and good luck with future stories. x

This was amazing.
Absolutely.. ugh. It made me cry a lot, laugh a lot and just smile.

3:
Thank you for creating this.

good story could have been better

thought this would be more action

been watching this FF since the beginning, and i really <3 <3 <3 it. nothing else to say, except for that i've enjoyed this fic alot and i hope that you have other ideas for something similiar. this one actually felt like a story compared to most other FF's out there which ends up being incredibly boring. thanks for a great FF eksley!

Just the epilogue left - ♥

Amazing last chapter :)

Ugh. I'm getting choked up again.
This was really amazing. This chapter was great.
I'm really glad that you worked hard to finish this; this story really is wonderful. You write all of the characters so well.
I wouldn't mind a spinoff for this story, at all, but that's really up to you. This is one of those stories, that when it ends... my only thought is, "it's over?". I hate that feeling.
I can't wait until the epilogue. Even though after that, that's that. The end. Sigh.

D'aw, that was so sad. But the part with Stan and Kyle was cute. I can't wait for the epilogue, even though I'm sad that it signifies the end of it. I'll be waiting. (:

Oh wow, that was completely amazing. It feels so weird to know that this is the last official chapter. This part was so beautiful, and I thought that it was so fitting for it to be in Kyle's perspective. And I like what happened with him and Stan in the end, I thought you concluded that part really well and I love how this has turned out.

I cannot even begin to describe the amazingness of this. It's an absolutely gorgeous piece of litterature, one of the most exquisit fanfics I've ever seen. It's wonderfully put together, the concept is awesome and... wow. Wow.

So since Kyle doesn't want Christophe, can I have him?
...
Okay, just kidding, but I /had/ to.
I CAN'T BELIEVE YOU ACTUALLY CHOSE STAN/KYLE OVER TOPHELOVSKI. Oh my god, seriously, I didn't think you were going to do it. But you did.
Such typical Stan/Kyle, but because of all the plot that came before it, it's totally okay, because it wasn't just like 'o lol, I like you...no wait, but your my sbf, no wait, I like you'. It had plot and Christophe and other stuff mixed in.
OMG I JUST REFERRED TO LIKE, TWO THIRD OF THIS STORY AS 'STUFF' WTF IS UP WITH ME?
I have to say, I'm proud, there wasn't even Creek in this last chapter really.
I don't know if you know noticed, but I have trouble not mentioning Creek in ABSOLUTELY EVERYTHING I write, really, and you know you do it too. Nothing wrong with it, of course, but sometimes you gotta focus on other stuff, especially in a last chapter where Kyle's the narrator.
I loved the Christophe/Kyle interaction, even if it was heartbreaking, which it was.
And Stan so got the hugs he deserved, I'm happy. :D
But.
Wait.
I don't want this story to be over. I'm...sad. :c
Mehehdsjjkadfjkdsale.
You know I'll be there to read anything else you decide to write dude, so go for it.
I love you~ epically much, dude, and I only regret that I wasn't able to review each chapter of this story as it came out, because it so deserved for me to do that, seriously.
Sigh.
Well, looking forward to the epilogue, whenever that comes about!
-tweek
P.S.: You're the only one I'll let get away with making Kyle such a scrawny little thing, I usually ** at people and demand they make him a MANLY MAN. But. Oh, pshaw, you.

HA! I knew it.
Kind of.
Not really.
KENNY. He's so. Perfect. And... gah.
Sacrificing himself for his friends. KENNEH. <|3
So sad.
And... oh, Jesus, it's going to end soon. The story. I'm always sad when a story ends. I know I'll be sad for this story, too, because it's amazing, and if I had my way... it would never end.
FUH.
You are truly amazing, my friend.
I love your writing, and you do everyone so well.
I especially loved this chapter, no matter how sad it was. It got me crying. Not that it's the first chapter of this story that has caused me to do so.
I'm really looking forward to the next chapter!