Ha, great story! Kind of random, but fabulous at the same time.

that was so funny!

My god, Beatrice is hilarious. So entertaining. :)

haha a reli cute fic i must say
and i like the other one from wen they were in 3rd yr too
good job:D

not to sound like a wet blanket here but at the top it says Lily Luna Potter and James Potter just thought i would mention it

LMAO! Wonderful!

That was AWESOME! I wish i had had a friend like that back in high school. On second thought, never mind - I'm glad I didn't. How mortifying! But poor Lily looked like she'd just lost her best friend AND her good grades and reason for existing, ALL in one go.



Aw, poor Lily. Excellent evilness from Beatrice. *claps hands enthusiastically*

Absolutely brilliant. And entertaining.

You continue to amaze us all with your stories! Delightful surprise when I found new stories in your account! Off to read the rest *prongsgirl bows to ghostofbambi*

LOL I like your Lily very much. I liked it that till the very end, Lily didn't mention just what James did. You've done Beatrice very well. The story wouldn't have worked out had it been anyone else but her. Great story, once again!

Fing brilliant!

thank you for that =) it was quite entertaining, and i rarely read one-shots if i do say so myself. love the way you express girl communication with such precision.

I really liked this, Beatrice is awesome.
Fantastic story!

Lily is psycho crazy.

Nice writing. I like the proper grammar -- it makes for a much more enjoyable read. And the ending is kinda cute.

(By the way, I read through the Seventh Year Train community quite a while ago, and it was one of the funniest things I've ever read. I don't know if anyone is going to update again, but I personally would be most entertained if they did =])

Haha, Beatrice was a great made up, one of the only friend of Lily I've seen who I actually like. And the fic was a really cute idea that yo made work really well. I loved how Lily realized she liked James only when she had to imagine him with someone else, and never seeing him again. Great job :)